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The Fallen Ones - Katya Sokorov - 23 May 2010
Ficul meu e in engleza... nu prezint personajele, nu are rost, e mai bine sa le descoperiti pe parcurs... sa imi spuneti cum va place
PS: Lythyae se citeste Litie (cu aproximatie, "t"-ul se citeste ca o combinatie intre t si z)
The Fallen Ones
PART ONE
How to Fly without Wings and not to be an Angel
How to Fly without Wings and not to be an Angel
Chapter ONE
Lythyae and Noroon
Lythyae and Noroon
Lythyae was apparently a normal teenager. But just apparently. In fact, she was a very strange girl. She was a Magic Tamer. At first, I have to explain what a Magic Tamer is.
The Magic Tamers are apparently normal people, but, in fact, they can use Magic Powers. Most of you, who are reading this, will say "Those are Magicians/Wizards!". But no. They are not. Magician and Wizards use demons, and the power they have is just to make demons obey their commands. Magic Tamers are kind of demons, because they use magic thorough their own powers, they are not slavish, commanding other beings to do their job.
Also, Lythyae was a Dragon Tamer. She was a very powerful Magic Tamer, showing magic powers since she was a little baby. This thing made her posses Dragonish Powers. "Dragonish Powers" can mean two types of powers : powers that Dragons posses or Powers that Dragon Tamers posses, but, usually, for making difference beetween them, the powers that Dragon Tamers posses are calle Dragonish T-Powers.
Lythyae was usually called Lyth, because her name was straaaange (I wanted to make the "a" sound longer). Her Dragon was called Noroon. Noroon was a female Dragon. Everyday, after school, Lythyae came home like a normal teenager.
So what's so special about her life ? Well, she uses magic to make her homework so she can go to her dragon and continue training. Also, he can fly a dragon (kind of flying a plane, but it needs spiritual connection between pilot and the piloted thing!).
But, sure, you want to see a sketch of the dragon. Try to imagine a green snake, that's got very sharp teeth, bat wings. It sometimes roars and it's tail is usually put like a spiral, so it can let him fly without occupying all the place around him.
Lfe with dragons is hard, but Lythyae already got used with this.
Chapter TWO
Flying a Dragon ... a hard thing ?
Flying a Dragon ... a hard thing ?
Well, first I shall explain what flying a dragon means : You get used to stay near the dragon first. It feels you and gets used to you. There is when your friendship begins. It's created a spiritual connection beetween you two.
Then you can fly your dragon without being awake ! Finally, when the spiritual connection finished creating itself, the dragon protects you and your life is for him the most important thing that exist : will even die to protect you.
If your dragon is scared of you, he'll let you die, but just if he is sure you'll die if he doesn't potect you.
THE END OF THE DESCRIPTIONS
Lythyae was flying across Lontemtunghol, the town where she lives in (which is a town which magic people - she goes to school in other town), usually called Lontem. Noroon was happy and in the light of the moon, her scales were looking like those emeralds. Noroon (usually called Nore) was slowly, silently, weaving her wings.
" C'mon girl, c'mon ! One more tight turn and today's obstacle course is ready !" said Lyth to her dragon. Nore went straight around a metal bar with a red top. She threw some fire in that direction and went straight down. Like she was falling. But she stopped before hitting the ground.
Lyth got down and gave Nore some WaterBerries. The WaterBerries look like small Water Melons, but have different colors and smells. They're a bit like films: everyone thinks about them differently. Also, WaterBerries can only be found by the ones who posses Dragonish (T-)Powers. Dragons love them.
Lyth got on Nore's back (again) and they started flying. As Nore is a TeenDragon, she's still got to train, especially now, because there are going to be TDContests (contests for TeenDragons).
There are three main parts: Obeying commands (few dragons train for these: if there is that connection beetween dragon and owner, there's no need of training), Fast Flying and Obstacle Race.
Nore was very good at the Obstacle Race although she still needs a lot of training for Fast Flying.
Chapter THREE
Maybe
Maybe
Keep the thinking,
I'm not linking
You to nothing
I am going
To say,
To lay,
On this "paper"
In this chapter
Now...
It's gonna come on Thursday...
OOC: Inca nu am terminat primul capitol
Re: The Fallen Ones - Bell Evans - 23 May 2010
inceputul e foarte frumos
astept continuarea
Re: The Fallen Ones - Desiree Rose Goth - 23 May 2010
E dragut
Astept si restul capitolului ca sa-mi fac o parere
Re: The Fallen Ones - Lizzie Craig - 23 May 2010
E frumos. Posibil sa fi prima care scrie in engleza pe DM
Okz... nu repeta cuvintele atat de mult. In engleza e crima O__O
Btw. Mi'a placut descrierea.
Quote:...Dragon Tamers posses are calleD Dragonish
T-Powers...
Re: The Fallen Ones - Bella Emily Rose - 23 May 2010
Felicitari
Cum a spus si Ally , cred ca esti prima care scrie in engleza >
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Re: The Fallen Ones - Katya Sokorov - 23 May 2010
Va multumesc ptr. toate laudele ... o sa completez mai tarziu, adica maine, si o sa postez cand am terminat
Re: The Fallen Ones - Lizzie Craig - 23 May 2010
Bella - cine e Neolynn?! Nu vreau sa fiu confundata!
Hei... asteptam, oricum!
Re: The Fallen Ones - Bella Emily Rose - 24 May 2010
Scuze
Din greseala
Eram prea obosita
Mii de scuzeee
On : Asteptam nextul , Janella
Re: The Fallen Ones - Lizzie Craig - 24 May 2010
Bine, nu'i nimic Se mai intampla
;
Janella, e luni
Next'ul pluteste in aer
Re: The Fallen Ones - Matt I. River - 24 May 2010
Asteptam tot capitolul Janella Oricum, dupa cum ai inceput, fic-ul o sa iasa super