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.shut the hell up.and listen. - Victor A. Olivier - 16 Jun 2012
Hear the silence
When I looked at you,
You turned your back
And walked away.
When I talked to you,
You covered up your ears
And made yourself gone.
How can’t you hear me?
I’m standing in front of you,
Screaming and yelling your name.
I tried to turn my nothingness into
Love, but it was harder
Than it seemed.
I tried to make myself feel
But I knew I didn’t deserve it.
Why?
You were too close to me,
You couldn’t hear my voice
Languishing for yours.
When I looked at you,
You turned your back
And walked away.
When I talked to you,
You covered up your ears
And made yourself gone.
How can’t you hear me?
I’m standing in front of you,
Screaming and yelling your name.
I tried to turn my nothingness into
Love, but it was harder
Than it seemed.
I tried to make myself feel
But I knew I didn’t deserve it.
Why?
You were too close to me,
You couldn’t hear my voice
Languishing for yours.
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Kurt F. Malfoy - 16 Jun 2012
you aren't subtle,dear friend. but i think you know that,don't you?
anyway,i like it. no,i'm a liar. i don't like it. I LOVE IT!
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Ivy Thibault - 19 Jun 2012
Aş putea să întreb de ce eu nu ştiam despre acest mega talent al tău
Poezia e superbă, are tot ce trebuie, versurile nu sunt lungi, dar exprimă multe şi ceea ce mă face să te apreciez şi mai mult e faptul că sunt în engleză
.Să mai faci poezii pentru că te pricepi cu adevărat
.
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Lexie Stryder - 19 Jun 2012
Doamne, e geniala poezia
am citit-o de mai multe ori si inca nu m-am plictisit de ea Felicitari, e superba >
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RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Isolde du Maurier - 19 Jun 2012
Thanks guys >
<YOU
My pain cannot be erased
By your ironed sword.
I don't beg for too much.
Only your golden kiss in the sunshine
Your lovely glare in the moonlight
And then you can let me go,
To fly miles from here.
Heaven seems so pale
When you're close to me,
And Hell resembles to
The darkest and less desired place.
I know I'm not good enough
And I know I'll never be.
But I told you hundred times
How much I need your presence.
Just let me breathe
The same oxygen as YOU.
My pain cannot be erased
By your ironed sword.
I don't beg for too much.
Only your golden kiss in the sunshine
Your lovely glare in the moonlight
And then you can let me go,
To fly miles from here.
Heaven seems so pale
When you're close to me,
And Hell resembles to
The darkest and less desired place.
I know I'm not good enough
And I know I'll never be.
But I told you hundred times
How much I need your presence.
Just let me breathe
The same oxygen as YOU.
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Lexie Stryder - 19 Jun 2012
geniala 8->
God, e superba, nu stiu ce mai zic in plus
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Victor A. Olivier - 19 Jun 2012
Young&Vulnerable
You are young, you are in love,
So am I.
You are hurt, you are vulnerable,
So am I.
They said we'd live forever,
But it was a lie.
They said we could do anything,
But it was a lie.
They put an obstacle for
Every step we took,
We tried to raise ourself
But we couldn't do.
That's why you and I,
We are born to die
Together.
We shall help each other,
We shall tell us anything
Because you and I,
We are meant to be
Together.
The sky is blue,
The grass is green,
The blood is red,
And we are black & white.
I don't want your love
As you don't want mine.
I want your friendship
Though you don't want mine.
So that's why
I shall never die till I have someone like you, though you are irreplaceable.
You are young, you are in love,
So am I.
You are hurt, you are vulnerable,
So am I.
They said we'd live forever,
But it was a lie.
They said we could do anything,
But it was a lie.
They put an obstacle for
Every step we took,
We tried to raise ourself
But we couldn't do.
That's why you and I,
We are born to die
Together.
We shall help each other,
We shall tell us anything
Because you and I,
We are meant to be
Together.
The sky is blue,
The grass is green,
The blood is red,
And we are black & white.
I don't want your love
As you don't want mine.
I want your friendship
Though you don't want mine.
So that's why
I shall never die till I have someone like you, though you are irreplaceable.
Ok, nu e foarte geniala, si e foarte simpla,avand in vedere ca am scris-o la 12 noaptea, si atunci nu gandesc prea limpede
, insa este scrisa pentru o persoana anume si tin mult la ea 
(si la poezie si la persoana ). O colega a zis ca descrie ce se petrece intre noi, insa e mai mult ceea ce as dori eu sa se intample XD
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Lexie Stryder - 19 Jun 2012
ba e geniala [-x
gabndesti destul de bine la 12 noaptea
serios, e superba si imi place ca ai bagat rime pe acolo si chestii Felicitari! >
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RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Ivy Thibault - 19 Jun 2012
Ultimele poezii sunt geniale
Ţi-am zis, îmi place că găseşti rime şi pe engleză şi că reuşeşti să le potriveşti pe toate
RE: .shut the hell up.and listen. - Guillaume J. Devereux - 01 Jul 2012
Midnight
Last night I took my pills,
And went to sleep, honey.
You don't even know how it feels,
When you're an artist without money.
But don't cry, my darling,
I don't want your fake tears.
I'm sick of false preocupations swirling
'Cause tonight I'll face my fears.
My biggest fear is of the dark,
The moarning monsters're in my head,
Though they don't hurt, they leave a mark,
But I don't want you to be dead.
My darling, why don't you come and play
Me and my monsters won't kill you
My world is hopeless and too grey,
As long as your eyes are sky-blue.
La primele 2 strofe am avut influenta Nirvana, la celelalte 2...hmm...
Poezie fara profunzime X_X
Last night I took my pills,
And went to sleep, honey.
You don't even know how it feels,
When you're an artist without money.
But don't cry, my darling,
I don't want your fake tears.
I'm sick of false preocupations swirling
'Cause tonight I'll face my fears.
My biggest fear is of the dark,
The moarning monsters're in my head,
Though they don't hurt, they leave a mark,
But I don't want you to be dead.
My darling, why don't you come and play
Me and my monsters won't kill you
My world is hopeless and too grey,
As long as your eyes are sky-blue.
La primele 2 strofe am avut influenta Nirvana, la celelalte 2...hmm...
Poezie fara profunzime X_X