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07 May 2011, 22:45
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Geniala o ador
 E perfecta
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09 May 2011, 09:55
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Multumesc mult!!!!
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09 May 2011, 11:41
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Imi place foarte mult poezia.Este superba.
Chiar si eu ma speriasem cand spusesei 'Ultima poezie.' Quote:Dar iarasi tristetea te chiama la ea,Imi place mult strofa aceasta.Imi aduce aminte de ceva. Two is accopany ; three is a party !. ![[Image: tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo1_250.gif]](http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo1_250.gif) ![[Image: tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo2_250.gif]](http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo2_250.gif) Give me love like never before, 'cause lately I've been craving more, And It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya. |
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09 May 2011, 22:52
Post: #64 |
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Multumesc mult, Tammy!!!
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11 May 2011, 10:31
(This post was last modified: 11 May 2011, 11:22 by Georgia Harris.)
Post: #65 |
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Roata sortii...
In serile reci, ori zile fierbinti, In patul de'acasa, ori plecat departe, Langa prieteni, ori langa parinti, Teama te strapunge intr'un fel aparte. Pe pajistea verde, ori drumul pustiu, Pe scanul vechi, ori banca murdara, Cu ochii'n pamant, ori in tarziu, Te simti vinovat din zi pana'n seara. Tie frica de roata, de roata cea mare, Caci ea e a sorti si'i mereu in miscare, Si oricat te'ai impotrivi tot te doare, Cand apare pana si soarta de calca'n picioare. Dar uite'te adanc in trecutu'ti de scrum, Sa'ti vezi greselile facute in gluma, Si spune'mi ce vezi, ce simti tu acum? Te piezi, caci nu vezi decat o minciuna. Sper sa va placa, nu e poezia asa reusita, dar merge... |
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11 May 2011, 11:11
Post: #66 |
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Georgya imi place foarte mult poezia.
Quote:Roata soti...La titlu' poeziei ai uitat sa pui R-ul la cuvantul sortii. In rest imi place foarte mult,este foarte reusita.Strofa aceasta imi place.  Quote:Dar uite'te adanc in trecutu'ti de scrum,Continua sa postezi.Spor la scris.
Two is accopany ; three is a party !. Give me love like never before, 'cause lately I've been craving more, And It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya. |
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11 May 2011, 11:25
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Ms Tammy!
PS~Am editat. Greseala de neatentie... |
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11 May 2011, 11:33
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Se mai intampla. :-j
Oricum nu era mare chestie,poezia a contat cel mai mult. Si este foarte frumoasa Georgya. Two is accopany ; three is a party !. Give me love like never before, 'cause lately I've been craving more, And It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya. |
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11 May 2011, 14:04
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Georgya, nu spune ca nu este buna poezia. T_T
Eu zic ca este superba. ^_^. Quote:Dar uite'te adanc in trecutu'ti de scrum, Partea aceasta este absolut superba. Keep going.
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11 May 2011, 18:33
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Georgya Potter Wrote:Tie frica de roata, de roata cea mare, Prea tare! Scrii genial! ![[Image: F3NHsVq.png]](https://imgur.com/F3NHsVq.png) The darkest hour is just before the dawn.
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