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The Revenge ~ Razbunarea

26 Dec 2010, 13:38

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Imi place mult ideea,pare o poveste de dragoste super-interesanta .
Insa am cateva sugestii. In primul rand,scrie mai mult intr-un capitol iar in al doilea rand incearca sa scrii cu diacritice,pentru ca dupa parerea mea se vede si se citeste altfel .
In rest,nimic de comentat
Superb! Astept nextul .

~For you,I'm Jess.

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Cele mai bune produse!

O mare dragoste este de neconceput fãrã o mare inteligenþã; inteligenþa este egalã cu profunzimea sufletului; iatã de ce sufletele mari ating culmile umanismului; tot ele sunt ºi mari inteligenþe.

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The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 25 Dec 2010, 14:37

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 25 Dec 2010, 20:01

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 25 Dec 2010, 20:08

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Ginny Anne Alden - 25 Dec 2010, 20:16

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 25 Dec 2010, 21:08

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Ginny Anne Alden - 25 Dec 2010, 21:17

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Katya Sokorov - 26 Dec 2010, 00:16

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Desiree Rose Goth - 26 Dec 2010, 00:31

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 26 Dec 2010, 13:00

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jessica F. Jersey - 26 Dec 2010, 13:05

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Desiree Rose Goth - 26 Dec 2010, 13:19

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 26 Dec 2010, 13:33

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jessica F. Jersey - 26 Dec 2010, 13:38

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 26 Dec 2010, 13:41

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jessica F. Jersey - 26 Dec 2010, 13:42

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 26 Dec 2010, 13:50

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 Dec 2010, 19:01

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Lissa Dragomir Shirley - 26 Dec 2010, 19:15

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Jade A. Crawford - 26 Dec 2010, 19:35

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Katya Sokorov - 26 Dec 2010, 19:49

Re: The Revenge ~ Razbunarea - by Bella Emily Rose - 27 Dec 2010, 11:11

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