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The wrong choice
05 Feb 2011, 16:16
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deci, deci, minunea mea a scris un fic impreuna cu Ginny
Trebuia sa apar si eu cu miile mele de comentarii

Quote:iar dusul de la baie functiona neincetat desi nu era nimeni in baie.

Repetitia asta putea fi evitata La sfarsit in loc de baie, puteai scrie 'inauntru' sau ceva de genul. Suna mai bine dar e foarte bine si asa

Imi place putin mai mult stilul din capitolul 1 decta din prolog.
E scris de aceeasi persoana s-au v-ati inversat intre voi?


In rest imi place foarte foarte mult
Imi place pentru ca nu e EXTREM de lung sau plictisitor.
Imi place ca e facut din mai multe perspective.
Imi place ca are o nota horroristica
Imi place ca e scris de voi


Quote:Deci practic , sunt speriat . Asta m-a speriat rau "raspuns pe o voce calma,dar in acelasi timp oarecum trista: "Da,desigur. La morga!"" . deci voi nu scrieti bazme ? mi-e mie frica cand aud de morti si sange ...

Zau asa, ai 5 anisori ca sa te sperii de fantomite si vampirasi? /Smile
Notele horroristice dau suspans ficului
Basme, zau asa? Cu parere de rau te anunt ca nu suntem Cranga sau Caragiale.
Daca nu iti place stilul, nu-l citi

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The wrong choice - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 04 Feb 2011, 23:15
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 02 Apr 2011, 18:26
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Apr 2011, 16:49
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Apr 2011, 17:14
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Apr 2011, 22:06
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 03 Apr 2011, 22:15
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Apr 2011, 22:25
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Apr 2011, 22:58
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Apr 2011, 10:28
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 16:52
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 17:42
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 04 Apr 2011, 19:51
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Apr 2011, 21:10
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 21:17
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 04 Apr 2011, 21:43
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 04 Apr 2011, 22:28
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 22:39
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 04 Apr 2011, 22:50
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 23:09
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Apr 2011, 23:20
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 05 Apr 2011, 16:48
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Apr 2011, 16:44
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 11 Apr 2011, 15:15
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 11 Apr 2011, 15:22
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 11 Apr 2011, 15:38
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 13 Apr 2011, 23:09
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 13 Apr 2011, 23:20
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 14 Apr 2011, 15:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 14 Apr 2011, 16:03
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 14 Apr 2011, 16:09
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 14 Apr 2011, 16:14
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 14 Apr 2011, 16:19
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 14 Apr 2011, 18:53
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 14 Apr 2011, 18:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 14 Apr 2011, 19:29
RE: The wrong choice - by Fleur Delacour - 15 Apr 2011, 16:25
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 15 Apr 2011, 22:09
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 15 Apr 2011, 22:23
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 20 Apr 2011, 16:16
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 20 Apr 2011, 16:21
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 20 Apr 2011, 16:29
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 20 Apr 2011, 16:38
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 20 Apr 2011, 16:55
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 20 Apr 2011, 20:58
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 22 Apr 2011, 12:40
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 22 Apr 2011, 12:54
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 22 Apr 2011, 13:19
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 22 Apr 2011, 15:53
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 22 Apr 2011, 16:34
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 22 Apr 2011, 16:47
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 22 Apr 2011, 17:31
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 23 Apr 2011, 14:14
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 07 May 2011, 23:48
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 07 May 2011, 23:55
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 08 May 2011, 11:12
RE: The wrong choice - by Bell Evans - 08 May 2011, 11:43
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 08 May 2011, 11:45
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 08 May 2011, 11:46
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 08 May 2011, 12:33
RE: The wrong choice - by Bell Evans - 08 May 2011, 15:52
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 08 May 2011, 16:21
RE: The wrong choice - by Bell Evans - 08 May 2011, 19:06
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 08 May 2011, 19:47
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 08 May 2011, 16:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 10 May 2011, 14:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 21 May 2011, 22:00
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 22 May 2011, 10:43
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 22 May 2011, 19:00
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 22 May 2011, 22:41
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 22 May 2011, 22:47
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 24 May 2011, 22:48
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 24 May 2011, 22:48
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 24 May 2011, 22:49
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 23 Jun 2011, 23:29
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 24 Jun 2011, 08:53
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 24 Jun 2011, 20:03
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 24 Jun 2011, 21:24
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 24 Jun 2011, 22:17
RE: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 24 Jun 2011, 22:40
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 24 Jun 2011, 22:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 25 Jun 2011, 00:21
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 Jun 2011, 14:09
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 27 Jun 2011, 11:51
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 27 Jun 2011, 11:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 28 Jun 2011, 15:02
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 28 Jun 2011, 20:31
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 Jun 2011, 16:35
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 29 Jun 2011, 19:23
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 29 Jun 2011, 17:11
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 30 Jun 2011, 13:07
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 01 Jul 2011, 13:43
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 30 Jun 2011, 14:03
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 30 Jun 2011, 21:26
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 01 Jul 2011, 13:50
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 02 Jul 2011, 13:01
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 03 Jul 2011, 00:32
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 03 Jul 2011, 11:53
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Jul 2011, 18:51
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Jul 2011, 18:59
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 03 Jul 2011, 23:03
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 03 Jul 2011, 23:15
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 04 Jul 2011, 15:13
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 10 Jul 2011, 13:10
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 10 Jul 2011, 13:40
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 14 Jul 2011, 00:48
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 14 Jul 2011, 10:17
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 14 Jul 2011, 11:22
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 14 Jul 2011, 18:36
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 15 Jul 2011, 15:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 15 Jul 2011, 16:41
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 15 Jul 2011, 21:17
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 17 Jul 2011, 23:31
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 18 Jul 2011, 23:19
RE: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 19 Jul 2011, 01:21
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 19 Jul 2011, 10:29
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 31 Jul 2011, 15:42
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 31 Jul 2011, 19:41
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 31 Jul 2011, 21:20
RE: The wrong choice - by Ellena R. Howard - 08 Aug 2011, 12:56
RE: The wrong choice - by Daniel Cruplud - 08 Aug 2011, 13:00
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 08 Aug 2011, 20:02
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 09 Aug 2011, 17:23
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 10 Aug 2011, 19:37
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 10 Aug 2011, 20:32
RE: The wrong choice - by Aylee L. Lovel - 26 Aug 2011, 13:31
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 31 Aug 2011, 11:57
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 01 Sep 2011, 21:54
RE: The wrong choice - by Aylee L. Lovel - 02 Sep 2011, 16:38
RE: The wrong choice - by Ellena R. Howard - 06 Sep 2011, 12:44
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 09 Sep 2011, 21:04
RE: The wrong choice - by Shayera Holl - 09 Sep 2011, 21:44
RE: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 11 Sep 2011, 17:12
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 19 Sep 2011, 20:07
RE: The wrong choice - by Bell Evans - 19 Sep 2011, 20:24
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 19 Sep 2011, 20:28
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 20 Sep 2011, 15:46
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 01 Oct 2011, 16:47
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 01 Oct 2011, 20:10
RE: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 01 Oct 2011, 20:27
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 02 Oct 2011, 14:30
RE: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 03 Oct 2011, 21:06
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 03 Oct 2011, 21:30
RE: The wrong choice - by Rose Dawson - 07 Oct 2011, 23:25
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 07 Oct 2011, 23:30
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 08 Oct 2011, 10:32
RE: The wrong choice - by Bell Evans - 08 Oct 2011, 11:37
RE: The wrong choice - by Ellena R. Howard - 08 Oct 2011, 11:38
RE: The wrong choice - by Effy K. Dietrich - 08 Oct 2011, 11:38
RE: The wrong choice - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 08 Oct 2011, 11:57
RE: The wrong choice - by Shayera Holl - 09 Oct 2011, 11:02
RE: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 09 Oct 2011, 11:46
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Feb 2011, 23:31
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Feb 2011, 00:05
Re: The wrong choice - by Robert Eric Smith - 05 Feb 2011, 13:55
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 05 Feb 2011, 14:00
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 05 Feb 2011, 14:38
Re: The wrong choice - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Feb 2011, 14:48
Re: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 05 Feb 2011, 15:00
Re: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 05 Feb 2011, 15:32
Re: The wrong choice - by Jade A. Crawford - 05 Feb 2011, 16:16
Re: The wrong choice - by Scarlett Soul - 05 Feb 2011, 16:23
Re: The wrong choice - by Jade A. Crawford - 05 Feb 2011, 16:31
Re: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 05 Feb 2011, 18:04
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Feb 2011, 18:57
Re: The wrong choice - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Feb 2011, 19:39
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Feb 2011, 19:48
Re: The wrong choice - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Feb 2011, 19:57
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Feb 2011, 20:01
Re: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 05 Feb 2011, 20:11
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 05 Feb 2011, 20:25
Re: The wrong choice - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Feb 2011, 20:40
Re: The wrong choice - by Ramona Neardow - 05 Feb 2011, 20:41
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Feb 2011, 21:01
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 05 Feb 2011, 21:25
Re: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 05 Feb 2011, 21:34
Re: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 05 Feb 2011, 21:45
Re: The wrong choice - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Feb 2011, 22:17
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 06 Feb 2011, 00:07
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 06 Feb 2011, 12:29
Re: The wrong choice - by Alma Rodriguez - 06 Feb 2011, 12:51
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Feb 2011, 13:00
Re: The wrong choice - by Helena Daphne Rose - 06 Feb 2011, 13:07
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Feb 2011, 15:27
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 06 Feb 2011, 15:33
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Feb 2011, 15:36
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 06 Feb 2011, 16:04
Re: The wrong choice - by Ema Snow - 06 Feb 2011, 21:06
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Feb 2011, 21:12
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Feb 2011, 21:22
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 08 Feb 2011, 21:30
Re: The wrong choice - by Helena Daphne Rose - 08 Feb 2011, 21:35
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 08 Feb 2011, 21:56
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 25 Feb 2011, 23:44
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 27 Feb 2011, 14:45
Re: The wrong choice - by Odette B. Malfoy - 27 Feb 2011, 15:38
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 27 Feb 2011, 15:43
Re: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 27 Feb 2011, 16:16
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 27 Feb 2011, 22:56
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 27 Feb 2011, 23:16
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 04 Mar 2011, 17:54
Re: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 04 Mar 2011, 18:15
Re: The wrong choice - by Evelyn Steel - 04 Mar 2011, 18:31
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 04 Mar 2011, 18:43
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Mar 2011, 19:22
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Mar 2011, 19:29
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 04 Mar 2011, 21:48
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 05 Mar 2011, 11:35
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 05 Mar 2011, 13:10
Re: The wrong choice - by Scarlett Soul - 05 Mar 2011, 13:14
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 Mar 2011, 13:25
Re: The wrong choice - by Layla Wong - 07 Mar 2011, 19:51
Re: The wrong choice - by Ginny Anne Alden - 07 Mar 2011, 20:38
Re: The wrong choice - by Rachelle Hathaway - 11 Mar 2011, 16:59

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