Lyrics and magic
19 May 2011, 21:53 (This post was last modified: 19 May 2011, 21:54 by Daniel Cruplud.)
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(19 May 2011, 21:10)Ginny Andrews Blackfire Wrote:
Focul Iubirii.


Si saruta-mi buzele aprinse,
De dorul dulcetii tale,
Iubite draga,
Du-ma in rai si apoi in iad,
Sa ma rensac din cenusa,
Si pe tine sa te iubesc,iar.

Daca nu ar mai avea greseli,ultima strofa ar fi genialaTounge(nu ma refer la renascFinna.. aia e greseala de tiparireTounge ).
Oricum,foarte frumoasa.Sunt totusi subiectiv,si ma atrag scenele de iubire.Si celelalte strofe sunt frumoase,dar cea din urma este si ar putea fi mult mai speciala.Tounge

Mult succes!

Nu incerca niciodata sa impresionezi sau sa fi prea complex.Nu iti va iesi.Fi simplu si la obiect si vei izbuti!,by m3[Mihai Petre Jr.]
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Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 01 Mar 2011, 21:56
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 Apr 2011, 21:51
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Georgia Harris - 28 Apr 2011, 21:08
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 28 Apr 2011, 21:42
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Melisse Y. Carter - 28 Apr 2011, 23:31
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 02 May 2011, 15:13
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Georgia Harris - 05 May 2011, 22:26
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 05 May 2011, 23:21
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 May 2011, 14:09
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 06 May 2011, 17:58
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Georgia Harris - 09 May 2011, 23:25
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 12 May 2011, 21:14
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 12 May 2011, 22:07
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Daniel Cruplud - 19 May 2011, 21:53
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 May 2011, 21:46
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Daniel Cruplud - 30 May 2011, 20:57
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 30 May 2011, 11:32
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 30 May 2011, 21:13
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Daniel Cruplud - 30 May 2011, 22:38
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 30 May 2011, 22:09
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 15 Jun 2011, 20:11
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 18 Jun 2011, 22:41
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 18 Jun 2011, 22:53
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 18 Jun 2011, 23:43
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 19 Jun 2011, 13:07
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 19 Jun 2011, 16:53
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 20 Jun 2011, 21:08
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 Jun 2011, 14:11
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 06 Jul 2011, 01:03
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 06 Jul 2011, 11:37
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Jennifer L. Campbell - 07 Jul 2011, 21:29
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 07 Jul 2011, 21:58
RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 07 Jul 2011, 23:23
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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 Oct 2011, 22:13
Re: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 01 Mar 2011, 22:21
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Georgia Harris - 02 Mar 2011, 00:14
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Evelyn Steel - 02 Mar 2011, 16:04
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Belle Marie Snowdrop - 03 Mar 2011, 17:39
Re: Lyrics and magic - by Georgia Harris - 04 Mar 2011, 12:12
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 04 Mar 2011, 19:15
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 12 Mar 2011, 13:29
Re: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 12 Mar 2011, 14:03
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Re: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 13 Mar 2011, 15:09
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