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Lyrics and magic

30 May 2011, 20:57 (This post was last modified: 30 May 2011, 20:57 by Daniel Cruplud.)

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(29 May 2011, 21:46)Ginny Andrews Blackfire Wrote:
Te vreau...nu te vreau!

Te vreau in bratele mele,
Te vreau aproape
Vreau sa te sarut,sa te dezmierd
Sa fi aproape

Cu ardoare sa te simt
Si cu iubirea mea sa te cuprind,
Nu te vreau in viata mea,
Esti ingerul negru aparut in fata mea,
Te vreau cu o dorinta pagana,
Te vreau din nou...dar nu te vreau!

Te vreau din nou,Dar nu te vreau,
Sufletul imi e nehotarat,
Te vreau din nou dar nu te vreau,
Ce facem iubirea mea?

Este draguta,desi era mai bine daca rima mai mult.Prima strofa este amuzanta,a doua are o tenta catre o tentativa de dragoste,ceea imi place,iar a treia strofa,ar putea parea la prima vedere una eronata,dar cercetat in amanunt,scrisa din greseala sau nu,este mai complexa decat pare. Tounge

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Mult succes in continuare si lasa mana sa scrie mai mult fara sa gandesti;Ala e talentul nativ Smile

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Spor la scris > Happywide

Happywide

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Nu incerca niciodata sa impresionezi sau sa fi prea complex.Nu iti va iesi.Fi simplu si la obiect si vei izbuti!,by m3[Mihai Petre Jr.]

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Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 01 Mar 2011, 21:56

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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 Mar 2011, 22:23

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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 May 2011, 21:46

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RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 29 May 2011, 22:34

RE: Lyrics and magic - by Rachelle Hathaway - 30 May 2011, 11:32

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