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14 Jun 2011, 19:13
(This post was last modified: 14 Jun 2011, 19:14 by Emily Swan.)
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Scuza-ma ca am pierdut primul capitol. L-am recuperat si ce pot sa zic e ca imi place
 Am cateva observatii. Prima: Nu are niciun sens sa scrii: mai mormaind din cand in cand a aprobare. Era mai bine doar "mormaind" Si ai facut o greseala mic mica: "Eu m-amincruntat si mai tare." Trebuia sa scrii despartit  Oricum, ideea e super si imi place cel mai mult cum descrii.Next!> <
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Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 13 Jun 2011, 21:32
RE: Loving you - by Ginny Anne Alden - 13 Jun 2011, 21:40
RE: Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 13 Jun 2011, 21:52
RE: Loving you - by Eliza G. Blest - 13 Jun 2011, 22:14
RE: Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 13 Jun 2011, 22:28
RE: Loving you - by Ginny Anne Alden - 13 Jun 2011, 23:23
RE: Loving you - by Eliza G. Blest - 14 Jun 2011, 00:07
RE: Loving you - by Fleur Delacour - 14 Jun 2011, 14:35
RE: Loving you - by Ginny Anne Alden - 14 Jun 2011, 14:40
RE: Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 14 Jun 2011, 14:37
RE: Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 14 Jun 2011, 18:03
RE: Loving you - by Fleur Delacour - 14 Jun 2011, 19:11
RE: Loving you - by Emily Swan - 14 Jun 2011, 19:13
RE: Loving you - by Raphael Olivier - 14 Jun 2011, 22:27
RE: Loving you - by Eliza G. Blest - 16 Jun 2011, 18:25
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