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Tristete la apus

24 Jun 2011, 13:51

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Doua observatii:
1) Daca povestesti la persoana I nu mai folosesti pasaje de descrie unde folosesti persoana a III-a
2) Daca descrii sau povestesti folosesti un singur timp, trecut, am observat cateva parti unde ziceai ca se ascunde, trebuia obligatoriu articulat adica se ascundea
In rest n-am ce zice, astept nextul .

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Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 07:36

RE: Tristete la apus - by Desiree Rose Goth - 20 Jun 2011, 12:37

RE: Tristete la apus - by Lylith Anne Campbell - 20 Jun 2011, 12:57

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 13:25

RE: Tristete la apus - by Fleur Delacour - 20 Jun 2011, 13:31

RE: Tristete la apus - by Ginny Anne Alden - 20 Jun 2011, 13:49

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 14:25

RE: Tristete la apus - by Fleur Delacour - 20 Jun 2011, 14:59

RE: Tristete la apus - by Robert Eric Smith - 20 Jun 2011, 15:32

RE: Tristete la apus - by Bell Evans - 20 Jun 2011, 15:41

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 15:50

RE: Tristete la apus - by Bell Evans - 20 Jun 2011, 16:02

RE: Tristete la apus - by Robert Eric Smith - 20 Jun 2011, 16:05

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 16:05

RE: Tristete la apus - by Ginny Anne Alden - 20 Jun 2011, 16:07

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 20 Jun 2011, 16:10

RE: Tristete la apus - by Desiree Rose Goth - 20 Jun 2011, 16:13

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 21 Jun 2011, 13:32

RE: Tristete la apus - by Fleur Delacour - 21 Jun 2011, 13:39

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 22 Jun 2011, 11:19

RE: Tristete la apus - by Robert Eric Smith - 22 Jun 2011, 11:40

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 22 Jun 2011, 11:50

RE: Tristete la apus - by Fleur Delacour - 22 Jun 2011, 18:19

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 24 Jun 2011, 13:10

RE: Tristete la apus - by Fleur Delacour - 24 Jun 2011, 13:39

RE: Tristete la apus - by Robert Eric Smith - 24 Jun 2011, 13:51

RE: Tristete la apus - by Effy K. Dietrich - 28 Jun 2011, 22:37

RE: Tristete la apus - by Anaella L. Hathway - 27 Sep 2011, 00:00