The Sunrise
01 Oct 2011, 13:13
Post: #3
Asa trec si eu pe aici! Sa sti ca ai reusit sa ma intrigi,epilogul este bine scris,si cu atentie bine inteles nu ai evitat faptul ca vei lasa cititorul in suspans deci te iert Finna Asa ca vreau primul capitol.
Chiar imi place cum ai scris,nu ai nici o greseala,iar exprimarea ta este usoara,este usor de citit si placut in acelasi timp.
Keep work!

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The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 01 Oct 2011, 12:08
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 01 Oct 2011, 12:35
RE: The Sunrise - by Ginny Anne Alden - 01 Oct 2011, 13:13
RE: The Sunrise - by Effy K. Dietrich - 01 Oct 2011, 13:50
RE: The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 01 Oct 2011, 20:50
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 01 Oct 2011, 22:29
RE: The Sunrise - by Lexie Stryder - 02 Oct 2011, 13:40
RE: The Sunrise - by Effy K. Dietrich - 02 Oct 2011, 14:23
RE: The Sunrise - by Anaella L. Hathway - 02 Oct 2011, 15:12
RE: The Sunrise - by Ginny Anne Alden - 02 Oct 2011, 16:41
RE: The Sunrise - by Isolde du Maurier - 03 Oct 2011, 16:12
RE: The Sunrise - by Eliza G. Blest - 10 Dec 2011, 01:07