Regrete fără antidot [One-shot]
19 Mar 2012, 20:34
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  • Imi place cum scrii Love
    Exprimarea e cursiva si frumoasa, folosesti multe metafore si toate sunt foarte frumoase. Imi place ca, cu toate astea, textul e destul de usor, cititorului nefiindu-i greu sa se puna in locul personajului principal si sa inteleaga exact ceea ce simte.
    E destul mister si destul suspans. In concluzie, mie chiar imi place. Abia astept sa citesc urmatorul capitol>Happywide<

    PS: doar ca un sfat pe viitor: incearca sa povestesti la trecut, e mai simplu si suna mult mai bine>Happywide<

“there are as many loves as there are hearts”
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* “All happy families resemble one another, but each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way. ”
* “Respect was invented to cover the empty place where love should be.”
* “He stepped down, trying not to look long at her, as if she were the sun, yet he saw her, like the sun,
even without looking.”


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RE: Regrete fără antidot [One-shot] - by Lexie Stryder - 19 Mar 2012, 20:34

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