Remember the world that you lost
28 Jan 2013, 14:28
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  • Din cate inteleg she actually did die Finna Anyway, imi place mult cum ai scris aceasta poezioara. N-am acum timp sa citesc tot, dar din cate stiu esti o scriitoare destul de buna.

    @Ivy, ai corectat majoritatea greselilor, dar la cea cu But whenever I would raise my prayers to the gods, they always mocked me n-ai avut dreptate pentru ca nu se foloseste de doua ori would in aceeasi propozitie. Cred ca ar fi sunat mai corect But whenever I raised my prayers to the gods, they would always mock me.


You're like one of those birds from the Summer Isles, aren't you?
A pretty little talking bird, repeating all the pretty little words they taught you to recite.

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RE: Remember the world that you lost - by Astrid Eir Osmund - 28 Jan 2013, 14:28

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