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Focul inimii

09 Apr 2009, 20:38

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Cred ca nu va fi niciun next deocamda ta
Ma gandesc sa rescriu povestea, la persoana a 3-a timpul trecut.
Asa as putea exprima mai bine sentimentele lui Kim si a celorlalte personaje.
Citez: "naratorul omniscient - cand relatarea evenimentelor se face la persoana a III-a iar "vocea" pare sa cunoasca tot ce se intampla cu personajele".
Ca si in viata reala, daca scrii un jurnal, nu poti stii sentimentele celorlalti daca nu si le exprima.
Imi place mai mult sa povestesc la persoana a 3-a. E mult mai usor pentru ca nu trebuie sa fii atat de atent la ce timp folosesti.
Deci, ce ziceti? Ar fi mai bine sa povestesc la persoana a 3-a?

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Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 31 Mar 2009, 01:59

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 31 Mar 2009, 07:59

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 31 Mar 2009, 09:58

Re: Focul inimii - by Anna McNair - 31 Mar 2009, 17:58

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 31 Mar 2009, 23:07

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 01 Apr 2009, 12:41

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 01 Apr 2009, 19:47

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 01 Apr 2009, 20:04

Re: Focul inimii - by Anna McNair - 01 Apr 2009, 20:06

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 01 Apr 2009, 20:13

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 02 Apr 2009, 11:03

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 02 Apr 2009, 18:05

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 02 Apr 2009, 20:18

Re: Focul inimii - by Anna McNair - 02 Apr 2009, 20:20

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 02 Apr 2009, 21:00

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 02 Apr 2009, 21:39

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 02 Apr 2009, 21:59

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 02 Apr 2009, 22:05

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 02 Apr 2009, 22:08

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 02 Apr 2009, 22:14

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 03 Apr 2009, 10:51

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 04 Apr 2009, 02:22

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 04 Apr 2009, 14:14

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 04 Apr 2009, 14:42

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 04 Apr 2009, 19:22

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 05 Apr 2009, 11:53

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 05 Apr 2009, 12:03

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 05 Apr 2009, 22:09

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 05 Apr 2009, 22:58

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 06 Apr 2009, 14:50

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 06 Apr 2009, 20:31

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 06 Apr 2009, 21:43

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 06 Apr 2009, 22:01

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 06 Apr 2009, 22:12

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 06 Apr 2009, 22:26

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 06 Apr 2009, 22:49

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 06 Apr 2009, 22:55

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 06 Apr 2009, 23:08

Re: Focul inimii - by Anna McNair - 07 Apr 2009, 11:19

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 07 Apr 2009, 21:45

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 07 Apr 2009, 22:08

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 08 Apr 2009, 21:35

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 09 Apr 2009, 20:38

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 09 Apr 2009, 20:55

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 09 Apr 2009, 21:06

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 09 Apr 2009, 21:10

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 09 Apr 2009, 21:14

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 09 Apr 2009, 22:41

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 11 Apr 2009, 17:35

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 13 Apr 2009, 23:20

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 14 Apr 2009, 02:09

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 14 Apr 2009, 12:06

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 14 Apr 2009, 15:48

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 14 Apr 2009, 19:01

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 16 Apr 2009, 01:29

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 16 Apr 2009, 10:08

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 16 Apr 2009, 11:27

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 16 Apr 2009, 17:49

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 16 Apr 2009, 18:24

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 16 Apr 2009, 23:55

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 17 Apr 2009, 22:20

Re: Focul inimii - by Briana Brighton - 18 Apr 2009, 11:55

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 05 May 2009, 12:52

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 05 May 2009, 12:55

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 05 May 2009, 15:06

Re: Focul inimii - by Anna McNair - 05 May 2009, 19:44

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 10 May 2009, 21:31

Re: Focul inimii - by Ada McNair - 10 May 2009, 21:34

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 14 May 2009, 17:13

Re: Focul inimii - by Ginny Malfoy - 14 May 2009, 18:31

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 10 Aug 2009, 20:15

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 11 Aug 2009, 17:25

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 01 Oct 2009, 16:58

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 01 Oct 2009, 21:18

Re: Focul inimii - by Kim Ryan - 03 Dec 2009, 02:53

Re: Focul inimii - by Bella Emily Rose - 03 Dec 2009, 10:42

Re: Focul inimii - by Shayera Holl - 04 Dec 2009, 10:11