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The love story:Vampire and witch
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The love story:Vampire and witch
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27 May 2009, 21:03
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nu e asa de rau...dar ai unele greseli in scriere si cam prea multe virgule,in locurile in care chiar nu trebuia.
Hmmm...ai trecut prea repede la subiect  ...eu chiar credeam ca o sa treca vreo 2 posturi pana vorbeste Layla cu vampirul...si am crezut ca o sa oferi mai multe detalii despre..stiu eu,colega ta,despre liceu,ca cladire,stiu eu,despre profilul in care esti...Dar e bine,adauga mai multa descrire [phiiii...sunt asa fiindca si eu am fost nevoita sa bag la descriere in unele ficuri deale mele,si sa sti ca nu e asa de rau daca bagi descriere  ]..Si sa nu fi atat de obiectiva... Imi place foarte mult ideea ta,sdar incearca sa scri cat de bine poti tu,ca sa iasa bine In rest...nu am de zis nimic in rest Imi place ideea,si nu vreau sa se piarda  Va adoricesc |
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The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Anne Alden - 26 May 2009, 22:22
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Malfoy - 27 May 2009, 11:41
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Briana Brighton - 27 May 2009, 17:41
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Iseult Cromwell - 27 May 2009, 20:00
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Anne Alden - 27 May 2009, 20:19
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Shayera Holl - 27 May 2009, 21:03
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Anne Alden - 27 May 2009, 21:06
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Malfoy - 27 May 2009, 22:08
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Anne Alden - 27 May 2009, 22:12
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Anna McNair - 28 May 2009, 10:22
Re: The love story:Vampire and witch - by Ginny Anne Alden - 31 May 2009, 23:22
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