Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ]

Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ]

05 Aug 2009, 20:30

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Ella Tamashi Offline

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Ok ... deci am citit si eu acest fic si pot spune ca mi-a placut. Totusi, ti-as propune sa incerci sa detaliezi sentimentele personajelor si ceea ce gandesc. In plus, ai putea incerca sa lucrezi putin la estetica deoarece asa cum ai pus tu e putin obositor.
In plus ai putea sa faci mai putin dialog si mai multa prezentare.
Ideea e buna si mi se pare chiar originala, iar modul in care ai inceput chiar m-a facut curioasa.
Astept urmatorul capitol ^^

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Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 03 May 2009, 21:57

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Black Rose - 09 May 2009, 15:17

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 09 May 2009, 15:26

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Anna McNair - 10 May 2009, 03:26

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 14 May 2009, 14:57

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Iseult Cromwell - 14 May 2009, 19:56

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Anna McNair - 14 May 2009, 20:46

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ella Tamashi - 05 Aug 2009, 20:30

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 05 Aug 2009, 21:12

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ella Tamashi - 05 Aug 2009, 21:14

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 08 Dec 2009, 02:31

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Iseult Cromwell - 12 Dec 2009, 20:11

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Ginny Malfoy - 12 Dec 2009, 21:13

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Jenny Spring - 12 Dec 2009, 22:47

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Bella Emily Rose - 13 Dec 2009, 20:47

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by Isabella River - 13 Dec 2009, 20:51

Re: Thornes Of A Rose [ A Draco and Ginny story ] - by HerArgus - 25 Feb 2010, 18:31

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