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06 Aug 2009, 20:34
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Din ce imi amintesc am mai citit ficul tau pe forumul meu, dar oricum ....
Ideea pare destul de interesanta, dar o poti face si mai captivanta punandu-ti amprenta pe ea. Dialogurile sunt cam seci si .... banale. in plus ai putea sa descrii un pic mai mult, iar la descriere nu ma refer la cum sunt imbracate personajele, ci la felul in care se comporta, la ceea ce simt. Astept urmatorul capitol ^^ ![[Image: Untitled-3copy.png]](http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w221/emiko_photo/Untitled-3copy.png) ![[Image: spas.gif]](http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll6/vge_2008/spas.gif) ![[Image: banner-mic.gif]](http://i284.photobucket.com/albums/ll6/vge_2008/banner-mic.gif) |
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My story - by Alina Potter - 06 Dec 2008, 15:36
Re: My story - by Ella Tamashi - 06 Aug 2009, 20:34
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