Poezii
07 Feb 2010, 18:18
Post: #3
Chiar suna bineLoveLove
Dar ultimul ver e cam...branzos Thinking...Adica ar fi mers...mai na...dar nu conteaza.
Chiar e tare
Si am spus si eu la un alt topic tot faza cu silabele...daca nu sunt silabe de acelasi numar nu prea suna atat de bine.Pana si un "se" sau "de" sau "mai" face un vers ca sa se lege mult mai bine cu cel de deasupra
Si eu am folosit mai demult rima imperechiata...daca vrei poti sa o incerci si pe cea incrucisata
Stii...pana si o rima alba are farmecul si frumusetea ei

Succes in continuare (L) Mai posteaza...imi plac =D

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Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 07 Feb 2010, 18:06
Re: Poezii - by Kasumi Mikoto - 07 Feb 2010, 18:13
Re: Poezii - by Shayera Holl - 07 Feb 2010, 18:18
Re: Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 07 Feb 2010, 18:22
Re: Poezii - by Bella Emily Rose - 07 Feb 2010, 19:45
Re: Poezii - by Ginny Malfoy - 07 Feb 2010, 21:25
Re: Poezii - by Lizzie Craig - 08 Feb 2010, 10:50
Re: Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 09 Feb 2010, 20:56
Re: Poezii - by Lizzie Craig - 09 Feb 2010, 21:09
Re: Poezii - by Bella Emily Rose - 09 Feb 2010, 21:51

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