Poezii
07 Feb 2010, 21:25
Post: #6
Ultimele doua versuri puteai fi inlocuite :

Privind spre cel ce'mi cere inca o sansa
Cum cade usor, usor in transa...


sau ceva de genu'..nu branza=))
oricum, frumos

edit: nu e obligatorie masura identica.ritmul se mentine si atunci cand e o diferenta de 2-4 silabe (numar par).
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Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 07 Feb 2010, 18:06
Re: Poezii - by Kasumi Mikoto - 07 Feb 2010, 18:13
Re: Poezii - by Shayera Holl - 07 Feb 2010, 18:18
Re: Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 07 Feb 2010, 18:22
Re: Poezii - by Bella Emily Rose - 07 Feb 2010, 19:45
Re: Poezii - by Ginny Malfoy - 07 Feb 2010, 21:25
Re: Poezii - by Lizzie Craig - 08 Feb 2010, 10:50
Re: Poezii - by Myriam Sowdware - 09 Feb 2010, 20:56
Re: Poezii - by Lizzie Craig - 09 Feb 2010, 21:09
Re: Poezii - by Bella Emily Rose - 09 Feb 2010, 21:51

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