The Bloody River
20 Jul 2010, 22:10
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Luce
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Rose Neelell

'Miau ... Miau ...' se auzea insistent, in urechea lui Rose. Langa ea statea o pisica neagra, zgariind peretele de la capul patului ei, unde era atarnat un ceas gri. Fata deschise ochii si se uita la ceas. Apoi realiza ca era sambata. Se uita spre pisica si casca larg. "Nu, Nikkie, e sambata, nu merg la scoala." Fata se aseza din nou pe perna si trase patura peste ea. Pisica sari pe lampadar si apoi pe policioara. Apasa cu laba pe un buton negru si sari jos inapoi. Se aseza pe patutul ei incropit intr-un cosulet si se culca.

2 ore mai tarziu

Rose se trezi si se imbraca pe fuga. Isi puse pe ea niste haine negre, iar adidasii aratau cam asa : click aici. Comparat cu tenul ei aproape alb, machiajul si hainele negre o faceau sa para o fantoma. Isi lua pisica in mana. Cand iesi, realiza ca nu era ca la ea acasa. Ajunsese intr-o padure spinoasa. Fata deschise usa cat mai exista si merse sa isi ia un rucsac cu haine si ce ii mai trebuia pentru o astfel de actiune...

Isi puse cateva carti, despre adventuristi, si avea un cutit. Deschise din nou usa si vazu curtea din spate. Inchise usa. Se uita dupa scari si iesi din nou, impingand usa cu mare putere. Aceeasi padure. Iesi repede si inchise usa casei cu un boom sonor, isi puse jos rucsacul. Acum putea fi vazuta in intregime. Era inalta pentru varsta ei de doar 16 ani, dar era destul de slaba. Adica avea picioarele ca niste scobitori si mainile ca ata [nu chiar la propriu]. Avea parul brunet, adica negru de tot. Desi nu era trasa la fata, era destul de osoasa [i se vedeau usor oasele].

Se aseza jos. Isi puse pisica in brate si o mangaie usor. Deodata auzi un fosnet. Un tanar, de cam 15-17, aparu de dupa un copac. Era imbracat la fel ca Rose. Se aseza jos langa ea. "Buna ... tu cine esti ?" spuse el o replica care parea de copil mic, contrar infatisarii sale. Fata isi ridica usor colturile buzelor. Atat cat sa dea impresia de 'imi pare bine sa te cunosc' sau asa ceva.

Isi puse pisica pe rucsac si se uita la baiat. "Sunt ... Rose. Rose Neelell. Dar poti sa imi zici Ro, Rose sau Rosie. Tu ? Si cum ai ajuns aici ?" se prezenta ea, rece. "Lucio. Lucio Kanes. Zi-mi Luce. Am ajuns cazand printr-o groapa. Nu stiu ce s-a intamplat ..." Desi nu voia sa para, tonul lui era putin mai cald.

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The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 20 Jul 2010, 22:10
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 20 Jul 2010, 22:24
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 20 Jul 2010, 22:46
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 09:09
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 11:50
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 11:51
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 21 Jul 2010, 13:01
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 13:07
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 13:11
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 21 Jul 2010, 14:11
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 14:14
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 21 Jul 2010, 14:27
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Jul 2010, 14:35
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 21 Jul 2010, 14:57
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 22 Jul 2010, 08:30
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 22 Jul 2010, 15:09
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 22 Jul 2010, 15:11
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 22 Jul 2010, 16:40
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 22 Jul 2010, 16:46
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 22 Jul 2010, 19:52
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 08:40
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 12:12
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 23 Jul 2010, 12:40
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 23 Jul 2010, 12:45
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 12:46
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 23 Jul 2010, 14:10
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 14:15
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 14:17
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 23 Jul 2010, 14:26
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 14:28
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 14:31
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 23 Jul 2010, 14:46
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 23 Jul 2010, 14:51
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 12:48
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 12:51
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 13:04
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:08
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:09
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 13:23
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:28
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:30
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 13:35
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:43
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 13:51
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 13:53
Re: The Bloody River - by Bell Evans - 24 Jul 2010, 14:26
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 14:34
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 14:46
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 15:26
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 15:27
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 24 Jul 2010, 16:16
Re: The Bloody River - by Helena Daphne Rose - 24 Jul 2010, 16:19
Re: The Bloody River - by Bell Evans - 24 Jul 2010, 19:39
Re: The Bloody River - by Katya Sokorov - 25 Jul 2010, 01:06
Re: The Bloody River - by Bella Emily Rose - 30 Jul 2010, 09:36