Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16)

Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16)

13 Aug 2010, 16:04

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In primul rand.. vreau sa te felicit!
Rar mai vezi pe cineva ca scrie capitole atat de lungi la un fic.
Si se vede cat de mult ai muncit, si muncesti la acest fic.

Critici ?
Nu am.
Poate totusi.. doar una.
Am gasit cateva greseli de ortografie, insa, ne-ai anuntat la sfarsit de posibila existanta a acestora si toti gresim, deci nu e mare chestie.

Ideea este chiar foarte buna si.. Wow. Parca as citi o noua carte Harry Potter, doar ca intr-o varianta mult mai amuzanta.

La capitolul ''Descriere'' stai chiar foarte bine.
Numai cuvinte de lauda.
Un singur sfat as vrea sa iti dau: Incearca sa scrii cu diacritice.

In rest.. cum am spus, am numai cuvinte de lauda, felicitari din nou! Si.. astept urmatorul capitol.

OFF: Ca veni vorba, esti la o facultate din Austria, right? [ informatie de pe blogul tau.. ]

You run. I con.

Tiger don't change their stripes.

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Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 13 Aug 2010, 14:06

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Isabella River - 13 Aug 2010, 16:04

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 13 Aug 2010, 16:08

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Isabella River - 13 Aug 2010, 16:12

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 13 Aug 2010, 16:47

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 22 Aug 2010, 17:46

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 29 Aug 2010, 15:01

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 04 Sep 2010, 15:46

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 11 Sep 2010, 18:14

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 23 Sep 2010, 13:31

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 03 Nov 2010, 22:08

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Jessica F. Jersey - 03 Nov 2010, 22:39

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 04 Nov 2010, 21:15

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 28 Nov 2010, 20:25

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Isabella River - 06 Dec 2010, 02:43

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 06 Dec 2010, 13:47

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 08 Dec 2010, 19:00

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by Munro Kirkner - 14 Dec 2010, 04:41

Re: Harry Potter si Sarpele Mistic (+16) - by theeoblk - 23 Dec 2010, 18:49

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