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25 Aug 2010, 20:06
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Dupa parerea mea trebuia sa surprinzi putin esentialul povestii in aceasta parte. Ce-ai scris acolo nu ne da nicun indiciu despre cum va fi actiune, pare pur si simplu o pagina rupta dintr-un jurnal.
Nu ma intelege gresit, chiar imi place cum ai scris. Spre ca urmatoarele parti sa fie mai sugestive si mai lungi Oricum, scri foarte bine 
my momma { raised } me a prophet
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Interzis! - by Layla Wong - 25 Aug 2010, 17:13
Re: Interzis! - by Ashton Blake Lively - 25 Aug 2010, 18:56
Re: Interzis! - by Veronique A. Dupont - 25 Aug 2010, 20:06
Re: Interzis! - by Bell Evans - 25 Aug 2010, 20:15
Re: Interzis! - by Layla Wong - 25 Aug 2010, 22:17
Re: Interzis! - by Ashlyn Meester - 25 Aug 2010, 22:29
Re: Interzis! - by Layla Wong - 25 Aug 2010, 22:53
Re: Interzis! - by Ashlyn Meester - 25 Aug 2010, 22:55
Re: Interzis! - by Layla Wong - 25 Aug 2010, 23:21
Re: Interzis! - by Scarlett Soul - 05 Sep 2010, 12:34
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