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06 Sep 2010, 21:26
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ce pot sa spun..imi place foarte mult prologul..chiar daca e scurt..
titlul si continutul se leaga foarte bine, ceea ce e de apreciat..iar sentimentele transmise sunt foarte emotionante Quote:Gandeste-te, nu ai vrea sa fi in locul meul. Sunt copilul abandonat, pe care nimeni nu-l doreste, sunt copilul de la marginea strazi pe care toti il ocolesc si il arata cu degetul. De ce? vreau sa fiu ca ceilalti copii!paragraful asta mi s'a parut superb sper sa pui repede primul capitol |
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| Children's soul | - by Ainsley Shannon - 05 Sep 2010, 20:39
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ashlyn Meester - 05 Sep 2010, 21:45
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ainsley Shannon - 06 Sep 2010, 08:05
Re: | Children's soul | - by Bella Emily Rose - 06 Sep 2010, 10:08
Re: | Children's soul | - by Bell Evans - 06 Sep 2010, 21:26
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ashlyn Meester - 06 Sep 2010, 21:39
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ainsley Shannon - 06 Sep 2010, 21:46
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ashlyn Meester - 06 Sep 2010, 22:10
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ainsley Shannon - 07 Sep 2010, 10:35
Re: | Children's soul | - by Bella Emily Rose - 07 Sep 2010, 11:25
Re: | Children's soul | - by Ainsley Shannon - 07 Sep 2010, 18:22
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