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~Amintirea ei~

09 Oct 2010, 15:07

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Kasumi Mikoto Wrote:Vin si eu, dar nu numai cu laude.
Zice Toparceanu - Genial e! - intr-o poezie : Si nu exista-n univers/ Mai mare crima/ Decat , la coada unui vers/ Sa pui o rima.
Acuma, "crima" asta se repeta la tine in 99 la suta din cazuri
Ai o groaza de inspiratie, vad, dar nu stii prea bine sa o structurezi. Incearca sa folosesti inversiuni ca sa respecti masura versului - asa e mai usor de citit. Si poate dai si explicatii in subsol, unele versuri nu le inteleg.
...Sau, ma rog, oi fi doar eu...
In orice caz, bravo tie! Eu nu am mai scris ceva de-un secol!
Go on.

Finna

...asa sa iti raspund ...o critica te face mai bun in cea ce scrii sau faci...multumesc...cat despre ce ai zis...nu ma prea dau in spectacol...scriu doar ca un hobby atunci cand ma plictisesc...dar sincer e o crima pe care o iau asupra mea...fiecare face ce stie cum poate...nu sunt un "GOGA EMINESCU SAU ALEXANDRI"...doar ca scriu simple versuri pe hartii...
Fiecare rima este o crima...imi place cum suna fiecare are dreptu la opinie ^^...
BV Kasumi Tounge

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...ma bucurat commentul tau !...esti invatat

"Ce vrei sa spui acum...Un criminal poetic sunt?"....poate ca ai dreptate Smile

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P.S...Era sa uit...oricum nu mai placut de cand am venit pe forum de ce mai placea acum!

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~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Oct 2010, 17:46

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Anaella L. Hathway - 27 Mar 2011, 17:41

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rachelle Hathaway - 28 Mar 2011, 19:23

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Anaella L. Hathway - 28 Mar 2011, 19:23

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 28 Mar 2011, 21:50

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 Mar 2011, 15:25

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 29 Mar 2011, 23:10

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ginny Anne Alden - 29 Mar 2011, 23:13

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 29 Mar 2011, 23:25

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 22 May 2011, 03:48

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 30 Mar 2011, 15:35

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ginny Anne Alden - 30 Mar 2011, 18:13

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 30 Mar 2011, 21:23

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Anaella L. Hathway - 31 Mar 2011, 22:32

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 22 May 2011, 10:25

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Oct 2010, 18:21

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Oct 2010, 18:45

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Oct 2010, 19:11

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 01 Oct 2010, 20:54

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 01 Oct 2010, 21:05

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 02 Oct 2010, 13:18

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 02 Oct 2010, 13:36

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ashlyn Meester - 02 Oct 2010, 13:47

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 02 Oct 2010, 13:52

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ashlyn Meester - 02 Oct 2010, 14:06

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 02 Oct 2010, 20:29

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 02 Oct 2010, 21:04

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 03 Oct 2010, 09:34

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 03 Oct 2010, 09:42

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 03 Oct 2010, 09:54

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 03 Oct 2010, 17:57

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 03 Oct 2010, 18:01

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 03 Oct 2010, 18:32

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 03 Oct 2010, 20:48

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 04 Oct 2010, 13:53

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 05 Oct 2010, 11:03

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 05 Oct 2010, 12:11

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 05 Oct 2010, 12:51

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 05 Oct 2010, 16:13

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 05 Oct 2010, 16:15

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Jessica F. Jersey - 05 Oct 2010, 16:19

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 05 Oct 2010, 16:28

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 05 Oct 2010, 16:33

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 05 Oct 2010, 16:46

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 05 Oct 2010, 19:09

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ashlyn Meester - 05 Oct 2010, 19:11

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 05 Oct 2010, 22:28

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Jessica F. Jersey - 06 Oct 2010, 14:39

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 14:44

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 16:20

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 16:24

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Vladimir Nikolaev - 06 Oct 2010, 16:24

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 16:27

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ashlyn Meester - 06 Oct 2010, 16:31

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 16:33

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Jessica F. Jersey - 06 Oct 2010, 17:49

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 06 Oct 2010, 18:06

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 06 Oct 2010, 20:52

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Ema Snow - 06 Oct 2010, 21:32

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 06 Oct 2010, 21:45

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 07 Oct 2010, 16:38

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 09 Oct 2010, 14:08

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 09 Oct 2010, 14:16

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Kasumi Mikoto - 09 Oct 2010, 14:50

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 09 Oct 2010, 15:07

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Kasumi Mikoto - 09 Oct 2010, 16:26

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 09 Oct 2010, 19:55

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 10 Oct 2010, 16:04

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 11 Oct 2010, 19:38

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 15 Oct 2010, 23:38

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 16 Oct 2010, 09:56

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 19 Oct 2010, 18:37

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 19 Oct 2010, 20:05

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 20 Oct 2010, 09:35

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 20 Oct 2010, 09:36

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 20 Oct 2010, 22:39

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Oct 2010, 07:36

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 21 Oct 2010, 14:04

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 21 Oct 2010, 14:34

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 21 Oct 2010, 18:58

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Isabella River - 21 Oct 2010, 19:02

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 24 Oct 2010, 20:29

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 24 Oct 2010, 20:40

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 24 Oct 2010, 21:00

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 24 Oct 2010, 21:26

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Nov 2010, 21:32

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Nov 2010, 21:57

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Nov 2010, 22:04

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 08 Nov 2010, 22:21

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 08 Nov 2010, 22:23

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 08 Nov 2010, 22:24

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 08 Nov 2010, 22:26

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Jade A. Crawford - 18 Nov 2010, 22:25

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Catherine Baston - 24 Nov 2010, 23:31

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 25 Nov 2010, 21:21

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Catherine Baston - 25 Nov 2010, 21:34

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 25 Nov 2010, 21:41

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Amelia Rodriguez - 25 Nov 2010, 22:51

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 27 Nov 2010, 14:56

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 27 Nov 2010, 14:58

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 27 Nov 2010, 15:51

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 27 Nov 2010, 17:50

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 27 Nov 2010, 18:38

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 27 Nov 2010, 18:48

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 27 Nov 2010, 19:36

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 29 Nov 2010, 00:01

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 29 Nov 2010, 00:25

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 01 Dec 2010, 00:31

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 01 Dec 2010, 00:41

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 01 Dec 2010, 09:42

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Katerina A. Petrova - 04 Dec 2010, 02:21

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 04 Dec 2010, 02:34

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Bella Emily Rose - 04 Dec 2010, 09:03

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 04 Dec 2010, 12:59

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 04 Dec 2010, 13:37

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 13 Dec 2010, 23:47

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 13 Dec 2010, 23:50

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 13 Dec 2010, 23:59

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 14 Dec 2010, 00:18

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 14 Dec 2010, 00:18

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 14 Dec 2010, 00:27

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 14 Dec 2010, 16:07

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Dianne D. McLarren - 17 Dec 2010, 21:10

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 28 Dec 2010, 18:11

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 25 Jan 2011, 00:34

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 25 Jan 2011, 02:07

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 25 Jan 2011, 13:23

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rachelle Hathaway - 31 Jan 2011, 15:07

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 02 Feb 2011, 02:11

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 02 Feb 2011, 12:37

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rachelle Hathaway - 02 Feb 2011, 12:54

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 12 Feb 2011, 23:10

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Scarlett Soul - 14 Feb 2011, 21:31

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Robert Eric Smith - 14 Feb 2011, 21:48

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 14 Feb 2011, 21:55

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Robert Eric Smith - 15 Feb 2011, 09:40

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 17 Feb 2011, 13:12

RE: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 28 Mar 2011, 18:14

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Belle Marie Snowdrop - 22 Feb 2011, 23:32

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 25 Feb 2011, 00:33

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 27 Feb 2011, 14:47

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rachelle Hathaway - 27 Feb 2011, 15:02

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Georgia Harris - 10 Mar 2011, 09:37

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 13 Mar 2011, 00:39

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rosalie Vivienne Alden - 13 Mar 2011, 11:26

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Rachelle Hathaway - 13 Mar 2011, 13:57

Re: ~Amintirea ei~ - by Oliver C.S. Queen - 14 Mar 2011, 16:29