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/ Possessed...

Ne cerem scuze pentru micile neplaceri cauzate de faptul ca a trebui sa redeschideti thread-urile cu povestile voastre... mii de scuze :bounce:

Si acum... imi voi " reposta " povestea mea... pe care cativa deja o stiu...

Possesed

Part I - Chapter I

Dark. Silence. Misunderstood mumblings... Something crawls on the slimy floor. It slowly gets up... and a deafening howl rises in the night. It's waiting...
Struggles...it's useless. You can't defeat it's power...
You lose your concentration...you are knocked unconscious... still, something in you doesn't want to give up without a fight...
You try to wake up... but you can't. It's taken over you... it controls your whole body and mind.
A pair of black wings grow on your back and two horns on your head. A terrible pain pertrudes you...
And now... you still wonder... are you possesed?

...

Whispers..voices... rotating in your mind...
Where do they come from? It's too quiet in the room.. there's no one in there but you...
You and him... you're the victim... and he's your curse...
What does he want from you?
Suddenly, the pain stops. You're feeling reliefed... You're falling in a deep sleep... and you don't feel a thing.
Is it heaven? Neah, you're still alive... your soul is still fighting for survival.
Is it worth it? Is it possible?
You can't fight him...so you give up.
You feel like a part of you is dying...while the other one is filling with power...
You stretch your wings...and fly through a broken window.

...

" Is he still alive? " " He doesn't seem so... is he still breathing? " " I can't feel his pulse ! ... "
Voices...again... you open your eyes..
People..all of them looking at you with suspicious eyes..
Do they know what happened to you?
You get up and try to leave.
" Hey ! Where do you think you're going? "
You don't care what they're saying...
You're a cursed-blooded guy...and you don't care...

…

Chapter II
The morning shines... marking the end of your terrifying nightmares...
Freedom, at last...
Someone or something is knocking at the door... and it opens it.
It's... her...
The only person who can understand you, the one who can listen to you ...
Still, she's not the one to know what's wrong with you... and that's really disappointing...
But how could you ever tell her the truth? ..
She runs into your arms... she whispers something into your ear...
Same words... " I love you... "
Now that's truly boring... different day... same words...
You force yourself to reject her... but you just can't..
Her attitude is priceless...
Suddenly... she gets up and looks straight at you..her eyes seem to ask " What happened? "...
Should you tell her?
You show her through a smile that nothing’s wrong…
She hugs you one more time…and then she heads to the door…
Hugs… secrets…and a couple of sweet words meant to remain unspoken… are you truly loved?

…

The room’s temperature is way under 10 degrees… still, you think it’s pretty warm…
She brought a pinch of spring, youth and beauty into your house…
11 o’clock A.M. … you’re still lying in bed, hoping that this day will be just like the other ones: … worthless for you… important for him…
In this type of moment, you always tell yourself you’re a coward…
You’re afraid he might attack…
After 5 minutes of intensive thinking… you decide you should get up…
But in that moment, you start losing your breath…
You have the feeling that two cold hands are trying to choke you…
You’re trying to get rid of them by coughing… but you can’t…
Everything’s getting dark around you… you feel the need to close your eyes…
You’re… dying…

Suddenly… someone breaks the door…
“ Freeze ! You’re under arrest ! “
Your pulse comes back to normal… and the possibility of imminent death disappears… for now…
A couple of policemen immobilize you…
“ For… for what are you arresting me? “ you mutter.
“ For completely destroying the reservation park in our city… you have been seen by 5 people doing it… they helped us find you… however, they told us that the actual thing that destroyed the park had realistic wings, but ,of course, we couldn’t believe that, could we? … You have the right to remain silent … “ said the police officer.
You try to avoid the police officer’s furious look… “ Hmm… prison… this must be fun “ he thinks… and as his thoughts echo in your mind, the policemen take you to the police department.

…
Chapter III
Lonely…
Abandoned…
He’s struggling to take over you… you’re trying to keep him under control.
“ Please…not now… “ you whisper.
You have the feeling that you’re about to faint… Your head hurts now more than ever, and an odd weakness makes your body tremble.
You close your eyes… you find it painful to just look around.
And now, your mind starts to travel in time…
You remember the first time you saw…her…
First day of spring… so gloomy…so clear… and she was like a small flower in the snow which was about to melt…
You went straight to her and asked her if she wanted to join you for a cup of coffee at your house…
And… she said yes…
A livid smile lightens your face… those moments seem so unique, so unreal…
Why isn’t she here? Why isn’t she cheering you up?
Why didn’t you tell her the truth?

Some voices and the sound of the cell’s door make you stop daydreaming and you open your eyes…
Her…again…
She runs directly into your arms… she caresses your face…and you caress hers…
She seems a bit scared…
“ There’s definitely something wrong… why are you in prison? Obviously, they made a mistake! “
To avoid talking, you try to kiss her on the lips, but she understands your plan and rejects you.
“ Why don’t you want to tell me anything?...Don’t you trust me? “
You sigh and try to explain… but she covers your mouth with her hand…
“ I thought I was your best friend… you know, best friends tell each other what they have in their mind… well, I actually thought we were more than best friends… but it seems that I was wrong…
“ You are not wrong ! It’s just that… “
“ What? Is there anything you’re hiding from me? Anything you can’t tell me? “
You avoid looking at her…
She gets up…and she’s about to burst into tears…
“ …and you said I was the only person you could ever talk to… LIAR ! “
And she walks out the door… abandoning you like an old toy…

…
Chapter IV
Her presence still lingers around… you still feel her touch on your skin…
The thought that she’s gone is simply terrifying…
… And it’s all because of him…
Why does he have to exist, to be part of your life?
Why is he in your blood? …
And ,of course… how can you get rid of him?
You feel miserable… you’re probably the only human being who shares its body with another…thing…
And that doesn’t make you feel special at all…

3 days have gone since she left…
It’s already become useless to resist him… he’s gathered all of his strength to take control…
And he’s about to do it…
The black wings and horns grow once again… and as the transformation completes, you start feeling dizzy… and he makes you scream loudly…
Then, you fly through the ceiling, destroying it, and you rise in the night sky. He makes you head towards…her house…
“ Don’t kill her! Please, don’t! “ , you try to say, but no words come out of your mouth…
You fight to make him change his mind…but he has already decided what to do…

Breaking a window, you enter her house under his command…
The sound of footsteps breaks the night’s silence… dressed in a dressing gown, she came to see what happened…
She got scared to death of what she saw… her beloved, transformed into God knows what creature…
You fall on your knees when she appears… a desperate battle between you and him starts…
You cannot let him win this time… she’s lost forever if you lose…
But he’s stronger…
She puts her hands on your face… she looks straight at you…
You close your eyes… you feel that you have hurt her enough and that you don’t have the right to look at her…
You’re moaning…you can’t take it any more…
Every part of your body hurts… pain… you can’t bear it…
And above all, him, trying to take control once again, and do what it has to be done…
In these moments… all you get to say is :
“ Save… me…”
And you fall forever onto her lap… you take a last deep breath…
And you’re gone…
The wings and horns disappear…
An odd fog rises above you…and it dissolves into nothing…
She doesn’t have the power to cry… her eyes have dried up…
She feels strange…just like something entered in her without permission…
“ Please…wake up… PLEASE ! “ she says…
She shakes your body, without a result…
“ Why did you have to leave now… now, that you’ll be a father...”

Chapter 5
A soft, trembling hand opens a massive wooden door… a woman enters through the door…
“ I’m so sorry… still, life must go on…“ she says… “ Are his parents going to organize the funeral? “
“ No… he was an orphan… “ says a weak voice... “ My parents said they will handle it… “
“ Ah… so we’ll see each other at the funeral, won’t we? “
“ I’m afraid we won’t… I don’t think I’ll be able to come… I’d die if I’d see him being buried… “
“ … Where is his body now? “
“ In hospital… they’re trying to find the causes of his death… they don’t know anything… “
“ But…you saw him when he died, didn’t you? What killed him? “
“ I… don’t know… “
“ Alicia… “ ,says the woman… “ You know you can’t lie to me…
Alicia…so this was her name…
Name of a simple girl… cursed by her own feelings for her beloved one…
Her no longer attainable person…
“ I … swear I don’t know a thing about the way he died… he just did… “ says Alicia.
“… Fine, then… I’ll go check at the hospital to see if they found out anything… “
The woman leaves her alone… finally…
Alicia locks the door behind her… and sighs…
She’d give anything in the world to just talk to him one more time…
A picture stares at her, hanged on the wall…
They both…together… ‘till death will tear them apart…
And it did…
Why didn’t God take her, too? She’d love to be with him up there, in heaven…
To see him clearly in front of her… to touch him one more time…
He’s too far away… but where is he?
She puts her hands on her belly...
" At least, you left something in behind... " she thinks.

Chapter 6
Hopes… torn apart… a ruined future…
A true fact… which became a story that no one reads…
Feelings… for a myth …
She’ll always believe in that myth… she can’t live without it…
Still, she can’t bring that myth back to life… but the myth will live into her heart forever…
And now… she’s feeding her soul with memories of the past… but that’s not enough…
She needs more… she needs a special ingredient…
She needs to be loved… she needs somebody to take care of her…
But she doesn’t want to admit it… she thinks she can handle it on her own…
But how can she raise her baby on her own?

The funeral day has come…
Alicia locked herself into her bedroom… and killed her time looking at some photos of him…
In an instant, she closes the photo album furiously…she can’t stand to look at him anymore…
She can hardly defeat her pain… she’s desperately trying not to listen to her thoughts …
Her suicidal thoughts…
And above all she’s feeling sick… she’s already been to the bathroom twice, vomiting…
Still, she feels that deep inside her, an inner force helps her get through all of these problems…
But… where does this force come from? Who’s giving this force to her? Who’s willing to help her, and why?
Reality strangles her… she gets out of bed and decides to go out to get some fresh air…
But when she opens the door… she meets the face of Alex…
Her ex-boyfriend and actual best friend…
“ Alicia ! I was about to knock at your bedroom’s door… how are you feeling? “ he says.
“ Oh… I truly think this question’s absolutely worthless... you know I can’t describe what I’m feeling in words… “ she says, with an emotive voice.
“ Oh, please… you’re still young ! He’s gone… live it up ! Don’t tell me that now that he’s gone, you won’t get to fall in love anymore… “
“ True… I won’t get to know love anymore… “
“ But… why? The baby needs a father! “
Alicia looks at him with pure disdain.
“ What are you implying? I’m not coming back into your arms for sure… “
“ That’s not what I meant! I’m saying that it’ll be very hard for you to grow up the baby on your own… “
“ I can handle it ! After all, the baby will get to know his true father’s past… “
“ And what are you going to tell him? That his father simply died into your arms under suspicious circumstances? I really don’t think he’ll really believe that… “
She starts losing her temper…
“ Don’t you…ever…mess into my life again… “ she says, and tries to leave the house in a rush…
He grabs her hand and looks deeply into her eyes…
“ Alicia… I can’t recognize you… what’s wrong with you? “ he says…
“ Alex…it’s just so hard… “
And she falls into his arms… fulfilling his ultimate desire…
To hug her one more time… to feel her heart beating… to feel her breath…
… After all… he’s still in love with her…

Alicia seems to be hesitating… while Alex is cuddling her…
He’s trying to reach her lips… but she’s rejecting him…
He’s so gentle… so unreal…he knows how to take her higher…
But there’s something wrong… why is she feeling so sad?
Why is she sobbing?
Alex lets go of her for a moment…
“ I can’t… I just can’t… “ she says, avoiding to look at him…
“ But… why? “
“ I can’t see your real image… I’m still seeing his face…”
And she runs away from him…
He can hardly hear her say “ Why is this happening to me? “ …
And he decides to leave...

It suddenly started to rain… so she has no choice but to stay inside…
She can feel his presence all over the place…
“ You’re haunting me, aren’t you? “ she thinks…
She has the strange feeling that something is moving in her stomach…
Her mind’s unweaving… she’s starting to remember everything…
How could she forget something so important? How could she forget that… he had wings…and horns… when he died?
Where did they come from? What creature took over him?
Did that creature actually kill him?
So many questions… she’s so confused…
She gets in bed… she tries to relax… but his image keeps appearing and disappearing…
Is he trying to warn her about something?
The strange movement in her stomach transforms into pain… she catches up with the truth…
That creature is not dead… not yet… it’s planning something…
But where is that creature lying?

I told it, but I will tell it again! Love your story

Thanks Ginny P..

...

Seven months of complete solitude and isolation… she hid herself from the world’s criticism…
Months of boredom… months filled with thoughts and thoughts… months of cancelled decisions…
She may be alive… but her soul is slowly fading away…
Until one day… everything lighted up…
One day… pain caught her up… but it wasn’t who she thought it was… it was just someone inside her struggling to get out…
Although every part of her body hurt, she was smiling… finally, her life will make sense…
She fell on her knees… and before she fainted, she managed to call for help…

She woke up in a hospital… around her, a couple of doctors were looking at her with serenity…
Pain was still harassing her…
“ You’re about to be a mother, dear girl… “ said one of the doctors. “ You should prepare yourself… “
Why should she prepare herself? She was ready and looking forward to it…
Time was pressing her… her eyes are again closing… his image is consoling her…
“ Are you ready? Ready?... Ready?...”
The doctor’s voice was fading… the hospital room was moving away from her, as she entered the realm of dreams…

“ Alicia?... ALICIA ! “
A familiar voice brought her back to Earth…
Alex was standing near her bed…
“ Did I…? Boy or girl? “ she asked…
“ Yes, you did… and there’s both of ‘em! “
“ What… what do you mean? “
In that moment, the door opened… an assistant was holding two little babies in her hands…
Twins… a boy and a girl… both safe and sound…
She was amazed… she barely could whisper : “ Thank God they’re healthy… “

( imi cer scuze ca n-am mai intrat in detaliile caracteristice povestii... dar o sa intru in detalii next time cand postez... )

Is such a lovley story! You know how to make a story intristing! God JOb! Congratulations

She took them home… she was feeling so weak after giving birth… but Alex was always there to catch her if she was about to fall…
The babies weren’t crying at all ; they seemed to be thinking about the way they got out of their enclosed universe, entering a new, endless and magnificent world.
After a few minutes, they caught sight of Alicia’s house…
“ We’ll be seeing each other again soon enough, won’t we?“ said Alex…
“ I’m not so very sure of it… if you like, you may visit me… “
“ Fine, then… I will just get going… “
In a silent hesitation, he slowly leaves… “ Maybe she’ll think twice about our relationship… after all, the twins will truly need a father… “, he thinks…
Alicia looked back at him…“ Hesitating, eh? Can’t do anything without hesitating, can we? Changing the normal sense of the word << to think >>, expected to be in your regular vocabulary…
Well, I presume I should get used to your tricky way of being… although I don’t have to…
Don’t worry… I don’t need your help, nor your affection…
And that’s because you can’t replace him… even if you think so…“
Regretting the fact that she didn’t tell him what she thinks, Alicia finds retreat in her cosy home, quietly taking the two little ones to her bedroom…
“ I can handle it on my own, can’t I? “
…

Something shines defiantly in the small kitchen…
Cold hands of uncertainty grab the shiny thing with ease … blurry signs of movement are noticed to be heading towards a children’s cot…
Babbles rise from the cot… the one possessing the strange thing seems to be unwittingly cutting itself with its sharp edges…
A knife to end everything done by dreadful mistakes…
“ Do it… for God’s sake …
Even if they are your children… they shouldn’t have been born… now you must end it all…
Do it… “
The hands are trembling… the knife’s approaching…
“ Do it… now… “
Dang…
Fell on the ground…
“ What is he doing to me? “
Alicia’s ears couldn’t hear any answer…
The knife was put away in a kitchen drawer… Sighs…
“ I’m definitely going mad… and I could use some help… before it’s not too late… “

After a few days…
“ Taxi ! “
Tears of rain weeping for a dead sun…
“ Where to? “
“ To the police department… “
Tricky innocence of ancient death…
Fooling, playing its game continuously…never to end…
“ Thanks, keep the change…”
Youth escapes…searching for a reason…
“ Can I help you, ma’am? “
“ Can you tell me where I can find the experts dealing with this case? “
A couple of papers written in dark ink…
“ Ah, yes… second floor, third door on the right… “
Steps…
Knocks…
“ Come in… “
A shy entry…
“ Excuse me… “
“ Ah, you’re miss… “
“ Call me Alicia, sir… “
“Alicia… Halestone case, am I right?”
“Yes, sir… I understood that you’re dealing with the case…”
“Yes, we are…”
“I…just wanted to know if you found out anything…”
“Miss… your boyfriend died under very suspicious circumstances. Our experts didn’t find any signs of beating to death or anything. We couldn’t take any blood samples… so he could’ve been killed through various ways.
Still, I must warn you… since in your statement you declared that you alone witnessed the death of your boyfriend, the police has enough evidence to arrest you… after an eventual hearing, you could stay in prison for at least 10 years…”
“But I…”
“We believe you, miss; but we’re just detectives.”
“…Thank you, sir…”
“Take care of yourself, ma’am…while you still can…”


She leaves the building, absolutely discouraged…
Suddenly…
“HOLD IT RIGHT THERE!!!”
“Officer…”
“You’re under arrest, miss… there will be a hearing in your case as soon as possible to state your punishment…”
“What…?!”
“Put her the cuffs on…”

…
“Now I’m just like him…”
Cold as ice…
Frightened and dizzy…
“What now?...”
Sealed into venomous eternity…
Poison and hate…
…And questions about past…
Present…
And future…

…
“Alright, everyone… we can now begin the hearing in the Halestone case… primary suspect and only witness, Alicia C. Preddle… prosecutor, you may start asking the questions…”
“Thank you, your honour…
Let’s see…
Do you swear to only say the truth?”
“I do…”
“OK, then…
Miss Preddle… do you know that your boyfriend was in jail a day before dying?”
“Yes… I visited him that day…”
“…And do you know that the second day, a huge hole was found in the wall of his cell, leading to freedom?”
“…All I know is that he came to me that night…”
“How did he come to you, miss Preddle?”
“…Through a window…”
“A window? You say he jumped through?”
“That’s what I think, I didn’t see him do it… the sound of the window breaking woke me up…”
“And what happened next?”
“I got out of my bed, opened the door and saw him…”
“What was he doing?”
“…Nothing special… just looking at me…”
“Did he say anything?”
“No… he fell on his knees… and stopped looking at me, as if he was guilty of something…”
“And?...”
“I went to him… I stood on my knees, too…”
“And you didn’t say a thing?”
“…I just heard him moaning and asking me to save him… afterwards, he fell onto my lap…”
“And that’s the way he died?”
“…And that’s the way he died…”
“…Miss Preddle… do you know if… anyone… visited him before or after being in jail?”
“I don’t know anything… I think I was the only one…”
“Your honour, I am out of questions…”
“Very well, then… Let’s wait for the gentlemen of the jury…”
…
“Miss Alicia Preddle… you were found g-…”
“WAIT!!!”
The hearing was rudely interrupted by a scream coming from a man at the bottom of the room…
“This woman’s innocent ! I killed Luke Halestone…”

OFF : buun... in sfarsit,"You" primeste un nume...

Asta-i cea mai patetica [virgula] continuare posibila *dying of laugh while reading*

Oh,Gosh
I told you i love ur writing,hun`
Great job ^^

P.S.Go on or i`l kill ya ^____^and i`l die waiting 2 lol

Thanx 4 za opinion, Iris xD



The man’s words awakened whispers in the hall…
“Order…please, order…”
He got closer…
“Your honour, I can explain everything…”
“How do we know, sir, that you’re not defending Miss Preddle?”
“BECAUSE I’M THE ONE WHO TRULY DID IT!! “
“I must ask you to calm down, sir, or I will have to ask the guards to arrest you…
Now, if you really are the one who killed mr. Halestone, can you tell us how you did it?”
“With poison, your honour…”
“How did you make the victim swallow it?”
“I put it in his food…”
“When?”
“When he was in jail…”
“Impossible, your honour.” the prosecutor said.” The victim only ate food from the jail’s canteen… that could’ve been possible only if…”
“…This gentleman had help from inside the jail, yes…
Did you have help…?”
“Actually… I paid the victim a visit…”
“And you gave him…”
“…Something to drink…”
“And the poison had dissolved into that drink…”
“Yes…your honour…”
All of a sudden, the crowd went silent… And the prosecutor viciously turned his gaze…
“Do you know this man, miss Preddle?”
“I’ve never seen him before, prosecutor…”
The judge looked at the prosecutor, smiling…
“Innocent till proven guilty…right?”
“But how can we prove that poison killed mr. Halestone, your honour?”
“Exhume him ! “ said a man from the jury.
Alicia started staring at the ground without moving…
“I say it’s a very good idea… what do you think, miss Preddle?”
“I… agree, your honour.” said Alicia in a sigh.
“Very well, then… It’s decided…”
“When will he be exhumed?”
“…I think it’s best in 2 days, don’t you?...”
The prosecutor grinned annoyingly…
“Oh, yes… perfect, your honour.”

Nice story!