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30 Jun 2010, 21:51
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PoSt MoRtEm
(continuarea de aici) Prolog ![[Image: lin21byd4d1.jpg]](http://img576.imageshack.us/i/lin21byd4d1.jpg/) Say goodbye As we dance with the devil tonight Don't you dare look at him in the eyes As we dance with the devil tonight... Luna isi arata reflexia tremuranda valurilor oceanului.Frunzele copacilor pluteau linistite in intuneric,duse de adieri de vant.Briza oceanului isi imprastia parfumul sarat in padure.Picaturi de roua alunecau pe trupurile gingase ale florilor de papadie. Cerul de onix nu fusese nicicand atat de incarcat de umbre;nici o lumina,nici o sclipire nu trecea prin poarta umbrelor. Valurile oceanului se spargeau violent de marginile ascutite a stancilor,in timp ce spuma se imprastia sub privirile lunii. O umbra se misca incet in intuneric,de parca incerca sa nu atraga atentia asupra ei. La naiba,isi spuse ea in gand,in timp ce vantul ii biciuia fata uda.Niciodata nu imi ies lucrurile cum trebuie. Se uita speriata in jur in timp ce o bufnita isi lua zborul de pe o creanga.Incerca sa-si puna bratele in jurul trupului,insa tot isi simtea hainele ude.Ar fi trebuit sa fie recunoscatoare pentru faptul ca era in viata si era constienta de acest lucru. Insa simtea doar o furie amara la gandul ca pierduse din nou tot ce avea. Se aseza obosita printre firele de iarba si inchise ochii.Am dat gres din nou din cauza unei greseli prostesti,isi zise in continuare,dorindu-si sa dea timpul inapoi.Mai bine o omoram pur si simplu si apoi totul era gata. Se intinse langa trunchiul unui stejar inalt,incercand sa-si limpezeasca mintea.Isi amintea senzatia de neputinta in fata flacarilor,disperarea in timp ce incerca sa evadeze…o secunda si ar fi fost prea tarziu. Si tinta ei scapase atat de usor!O zarise in timp ce era tarata afara de un grup de oameni necunoscuti.Se incrunta,gandindu-se la fisurile din planul ei:cum au gasit persoanele acelea cabana? Scopul ei de atatia ani fusese dus pe aripile zbuciumate ale vantului. Fiecare fibra din corpul ei era incarcata cu ura.Si auzea voci difuze in furia ei nepotolita. Razbunare….razbunare….
and the crashes are heavy for a sinner like me ~
![[Image: tumblr_m672ztrjKL1qa5eu4o1_250.gif]](http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m672ztrjKL1qa5eu4o1_250.gif) ![[Image: tumblr_m672ztrjKL1qa5eu4o2_250.gif]](http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m672ztrjKL1qa5eu4o2_250.gif) You're too pretty for your own good. That's why you destroy everything you touch. Love you, Bells.
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30 Jun 2010, 21:54
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OMG
E foarte tare , Desiree De abia astept sa vad ce se intampla mai departe 
- Bella Emily Rose - There's a white moon hanging in the southern sky, under the sun rising in the east, but the west wind sings for me. ![[Image: fight.png]](http://i1011.photobucket.com/albums/af237/BellatrixCullen/fight.png) I love you , Dess. |
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30 Jun 2010, 21:54
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Iti place?
Mie nu mi-a placut cum a iesit
and the crashes are heavy for a sinner like me ~
You're too pretty for your own good. That's why you destroy everything you touch. Love you, Bells.
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30 Jun 2010, 21:55
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Normal ca imi place.
Adica .. e malefic Dar imi place 
- Bella Emily Rose - There's a white moon hanging in the southern sky, under the sun rising in the east, but the west wind sings for me. I love you , Dess. |
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30 Jun 2010, 22:00
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Inca vreo 4 comentarii si va pun capitolul 1
and the crashes are heavy for a sinner like me ~
You're too pretty for your own good. That's why you destroy everything you touch. Love you, Bells.
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30 Jun 2010, 22:01
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Haideti oameni buni
Ficul asta merita orice
- Bella Emily Rose - There's a white moon hanging in the southern sky, under the sun rising in the east, but the west wind sings for me. I love you , Dess. |
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30 Jun 2010, 22:02
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Wow...deci e super Desiree
Cum poti zice ca nu-ti place? Imi place cum descrii Te rugam sa pui capitolul ![[Image: 10zvlg1.jpg]](http://oi44.tinypic.com/10zvlg1.jpg) I see nothing in your eyes, and the more I see the less I like. I know nothing of your kind, and I won't reveal your evil mind. Is it over yet? I can't win. |
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30 Jun 2010, 23:22
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deci in sfarsit continarea de la cel mai palpitant fic de pe acest site
abia asteptam sa o pui doar stii ca eu sunt fanul tau #1 e superb deci acum sa inteleg ca povestesti din punctul de vedere al Briellei destul de interesant abia astept sa vad pe cine mai omoara nebuna asta Opusul iubirii e indiferenta, nu ura. Daca ma urasti, inseamna ca inca iti mai pasa
de mine si ca eu pot sa te modelez cum vreau. ![[Image: Signature_by_AliceMorris.jpg]](http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/173/7/a/Signature_by_AliceMorris.jpg) |
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01 Jul 2010, 07:18
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Gresit , Sophy
Eu sunt fanul ei numarul 1 , nu'i asa , Desiree ? Numai ea stie cat am secat'o la cap sa scrie nextul Azi poate avem cap. I
- Bella Emily Rose - There's a white moon hanging in the southern sky, under the sun rising in the east, but the west wind sings for me. I love you , Dess. |
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01 Jul 2010, 09:22
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Next in seara asta (daca sunteti cuminti si daca mai primesc comm-uri )
and the crashes are heavy for a sinner like me ~
You're too pretty for your own good. That's why you destroy everything you touch. Love you, Bells.
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