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Tandem

23 Apr 2012, 15:56

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De cand asteptam eu sa faci un fic
Deeci...
Este genial. Personajul principal, James, se vede ca este bine definit, l-ai facut foarte tare. Apoi, imi place cum ai descris totul, mai ales gandurile lui, si ador faptul ca, cu fiecare propozitie, invat ceva mai mult despre James, incep sa inteleg modul in care gandeste el.

Apoi, si celelalte personaje, chiar daca nu sunt principale, sun foarte bine lucrate. In primul rand, numele (lizzie si Jensen) care se potrivesc foarte bine cu caracterul lor. Si apoi, gesturile pe care le fac (cum ar fi pasii in spate a lui Lizzie) care se ajuta sa ne dam seama de mai multe lucruri care ii definesc.

Deeeci, esti un geniu ><

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Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 21 Apr 2012, 16:46

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 21 Apr 2012, 17:04

RE: Tandem - by Agnes Marie Lovel - 21 Apr 2012, 17:07

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 22 Apr 2012, 13:25

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 22 Apr 2012, 14:22

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 22 Apr 2012, 15:50

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 22 Apr 2012, 16:12

RE: Tandem - by Natalie Francis - 22 Apr 2012, 16:15

RE: Tandem - by Aylee L. Lovel - 22 Apr 2012, 20:46

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 23 Apr 2012, 15:32

RE: Tandem - by Ivy Thibault - 23 Apr 2012, 15:56

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 23 Apr 2012, 17:11

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 23 Apr 2012, 17:14

RE: Tandem - by Ivy Thibault - 23 Apr 2012, 17:30

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 23 Apr 2012, 17:54

RE: Tandem - by Aylee L. Lovel - 23 Apr 2012, 19:01

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 24 Apr 2012, 17:46

RE: Tandem - by Freyja Maegan Guðríðr - 24 Apr 2012, 18:10

RE: Tandem - by Aylee L. Lovel - 24 Apr 2012, 18:22

RE: Tandem - by Ivy Thibault - 25 Apr 2012, 14:32

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 25 Apr 2012, 14:37

RE: Tandem - by Freyja Maegan Guðríðr - 26 Apr 2012, 16:33

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 26 Apr 2012, 17:54

RE: Tandem - by Freyja Maegan Guðríðr - 26 Apr 2012, 19:06

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 26 Apr 2012, 19:39

RE: Tandem - by Freyja Maegan Guðríðr - 26 Apr 2012, 19:52

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 27 Apr 2012, 17:34

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 29 Apr 2012, 14:34

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 04 May 2012, 23:58

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 02 Jun 2012, 14:02

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 02 Jun 2012, 15:21

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 02 Jun 2012, 15:47

RE: Tandem - by Arlin van Iver - 02 Jun 2012, 16:13

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 03 Jun 2012, 16:01

RE: Tandem - by Arlin van Iver - 03 Jun 2012, 18:12

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 03 Jun 2012, 22:53

RE: Tandem - by Arlin van Iver - 03 Jun 2012, 23:26

RE: Tandem - by Ophelia Wilde - 04 Jun 2012, 10:43

RE: Tandem - by Arlin van Iver - 04 Jun 2012, 12:50

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 04 Jun 2012, 13:03

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 04 Jun 2012, 18:26

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 16 Jun 2012, 15:11

RE: Tandem - by Victor A. Olivier - 12 Jul 2012, 14:01

RE: Tandem - by Effy K. Dietrich - 12 Jul 2012, 23:15

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 13 Jul 2012, 07:56

RE: Tandem - by Isolde du Maurier - 13 Jul 2012, 09:22

RE: Tandem - by Kurt F. Malfoy - 13 Jul 2012, 09:52

RE: Tandem - by Lexie Stryder - 14 Jul 2012, 10:48