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O nouã erã [Fantasy, Drama, Romance]
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O nouã erã [Fantasy, Drama, Romance]
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15 Jan 2009, 00:03
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E dragut, dar m-ai cam ametit cu elfi, spiridusi, si ce or mai fi aia... nu prea le am cu astea ... si nici nu m-am uitat la "Stapanul inelelor "
Hmm, am observat niste greseli de ortografie... niste virgule in plus, adica... Paragrafele sunt unpic cam mari, dar asta nu prea conteaza, anyway... In rest e foarte bun, imi place inceputul... Hai cu nextul ![[Image: 20htuyu.jpg]](http://i44.tinypic.com/20htuyu.jpg) |
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