The Unexpected
28 Aug 2010, 22:09
Post: #11
stii ce imi place cel mai mult la ficul asta pe langa faptul ca e in engleza, si ca imi place actiunea, si cum scrii, imi place ca faci capitolele lungi dar nu inteleg de ce le numesti episoade oricum, ai scris undeva "we're" si ar fi trebuit "were" la acel flashback, sau cum ii spune, unde Michel isi amintea ce a fost cu ea si Chirs mi'a placut mult partea a 2a, nu intreba de ce as vrea sa comentez mai mult, dar chiar nu am ce, e foarte tare, totul

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The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 26 Aug 2010, 22:26
Re: The Unexpected - by Matt I. River - 26 Aug 2010, 23:05
Re: The Unexpected - by Alice Morris - 26 Aug 2010, 23:13
Re: The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 27 Aug 2010, 14:43
Re: The Unexpected - by Alice Morris - 27 Aug 2010, 14:56
Re: The Unexpected - by Matt I. River - 27 Aug 2010, 17:20
Re: The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 27 Aug 2010, 21:40
Re: The Unexpected - by Alice Morris - 27 Aug 2010, 21:44
Re: The Unexpected - by Matt I. River - 27 Aug 2010, 22:07
Re: The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 28 Aug 2010, 21:55
Re: The Unexpected - by Alice Morris - 28 Aug 2010, 22:09
Re: The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 28 Aug 2010, 22:12
Re: The Unexpected - by Bell Evans - 29 Aug 2010, 12:08
Re: The Unexpected - by Anna McNair - 29 Aug 2010, 16:26