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Scrisorile cu funda.
27 Feb 2011, 14:13 (This post was last modified: 26 Mar 2011, 23:49 by Rachelle Hathaway.)
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Scrisorile cu funda.
-Personaje.-
Kate.-ochii verzi par saten varsta 16 ani
Annalynn-ochii albastri par blond varsta 15 ani prietena cea mai buna a lui Kate.
Edward.-par saten ochii verzi varsta 17 ani fostul iubit al Annalynn
Joe.-par saten ochii caprui varsta 16 ani prieten bun al lui Kate.
Emma-par saten ochii verzi varsta 7 ani micuta omorata.


Prolog.
  • Razele lunii se oglindeau în ochii ei, adierea vântului se regãsea in miºcarile sale fine si delicate, vocea sa era aidoma susurului izvorului. Natura, cu toate minunãþiile sale se gãseau in fiinþa ºi persoana sa…Se depãrtã incet de patul sau, ºi se apropie de fereastra deschisã. Vântul începu sã îi însufleþeascã pletele-i aurii, mângâindu-i dulcea faþã.Ceasul micuþ ºi uitat într-un colþ al încãperii îºi miºcã agale acele, indicând obosit ora douãsprezece.Un þipã prelung ºi rãsunãtor sparse tãcerea nopþii,Emma o fetiþa de doar sapte ani fugi dupa oglinada inalta asteptând sã se termine tot dezastrul,dar o durere insuportabilã în umãr o facu sã cad moartã.Kate încearcã sã afle cine a omorât toatã familia Emei dar când gãsesc cat mai multe indici aflând numele atacatorului Kate si prietenii ei mor in cele mai sinistre accidente.Oare vor scapã din ghearele morþii?

Aºtept critici si pãreri. ^_^
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Give me love like never before, 'cause lately I've been craving more, And
It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You
Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is
Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya.
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27 Feb 2011, 14:17
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E foarte interesant. Imi place mult.
Abea astept sa continui.
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27 Feb 2011, 14:23
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Super tare inceputul
De-abia astept continuarea
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27 Feb 2011, 14:25
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Multumesc.
Mai astept pareri daca nu va place nu-l mai continui,am scris si naspa. X_X
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It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You
Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is
Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya.
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27 Feb 2011, 14:32
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Cam infricosarator, dar imi place, abia astept capitolul I, parca si vad cum se numeste, "Petreceara dinainte mortii" Happywide, sunt nerabdator si credema daca mie imi place ceva atunci asta este
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27 Feb 2011, 14:55
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Deci,Tammy,imi place foarte mult .
Abia astept capitolul I.
~Abia acum am trecut pe aici. ~
Deja sunt curioasa cum va urma.
Ma bucur ca te-ai apucat de un fic
Mult succes la scris in continuare
Am sa citesc .. Din acest moment sunt cititoarea ta fidela.
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27 Feb 2011, 17:04
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Ma bucur ca iti place Rose.
Cred ca in seara aceasta o sa pun primul capitol pana atunci mai astept pareri despre prolog. Spuneti si critici ca nu ma supar. :-)
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Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is
Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya.
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27 Feb 2011, 18:31
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Bine, daca vrei critici iti dau Deci, dupa mine ar trebui sa scri mai mult ca am terminat de citit in 3 minute si m-am uitat si la poze in timpul asta ... in rest imi place Smile
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27 Feb 2011, 18:34
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@Robby acela a fost un mic rezumat despre ce voi scrie eu in tot ficu'.
Primul capitol va fi mai mare de atat Finna[Logic]Ma apuc de el acuma. Deci mai puteti scrie pareri despre prolog.
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It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You
Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is
Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya.
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27 Feb 2011, 19:01
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Ma rog, eu credeam ca Prolog inseamna ca prezinta situatia dar nu povesteste ce va avea sa se intample in urmatoarele capitole ... Oricum, noi asteptam
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