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The deathly taste of revenge
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03 Jul 2011, 13:37
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The deathly taste of revenge ![[Image: 2crvgid.jpg]](http://i51.tinypic.com/2crvgid.jpg) Prolog:
Ea nu mai stie de mult ce inseamna fericirea. De cand i-au murit cele mai dragi fiinte care au existat in viata sa,sufera intruna si nu este dispusa sa iubeasca din nou. Acum,dorinta de razbunare o macina pe dinauntru si este sigura ca intr-o zi va izbuti sa isi razbune familia. Va afla cine i-a ucis si va fi acolo , in fata criminalilor facandu-i sa sufere exact cum a suferit ea la randul sau. Academia de Politie - singurul lucru real care i-a ramas in viata,pe care il va urma pentru a-si atinge scopurile.
Personajul principal:
![[Image: 1t366v.jpg]](http://i54.tinypic.com/1t366v.jpg) Ok,deci dupa cum puteti vedea am inceput un nou fic. ^_^. De data aceasta il fac singura.  Mi-ar placea sa aud cateva pareri inainte sa scriu si sa postez primul capitol..sa vad daca are rost. Stiu ca nu e lung si nici prea interesant,dar e ca un fel de introducere .. sa zicem asa. Astept pareri si critici.  ![[Image: giphy.gif]](https://media3.giphy.com/media/Cn1dqRNSIJ5n2/giphy.gif) |
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03 Jul 2011, 13:44
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WOW cum am m-ai spus si pe mess.Toate personajele tale au povesti asemanatoare si vad ca iti plac foarte mult povestile politiste.Imi place totusi titlul e interesant.Sper sa fie la fel de grozav ca celelate.
Astept Calpitolul 1.
![[Image: alma.png]](http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd513/RobbyGFX/alma.png) |
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03 Jul 2011, 14:28
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Oooo razbunare
 .Imi placee .Fata aceea buna dar care devine rea  .Yeap,vreau primul capitol .
Demons run when a good man goes to war. ~ This is the story of how i died. ~ ![[Image: tumblr_lt2fi0ODJa1qjihk3o1_250.gif]](http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt2fi0ODJa1qjihk3o1_250.gif) ![[Image: tumblr_lt2fi0ODJa1qjihk3o2_250.gif]](http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lt2fi0ODJa1qjihk3o2_250.gif) ~ Oh,i could throw you in the lake or feed you poison birthday cake.
And i won't deny,i'm gonna miss you when you're gone!~ |
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03 Jul 2011, 15:08
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Uuu sys,baga mai repede capitolul 1 ca imi place
Razbunaare Deci vreu mai repede capitolul 1
![[Image: YotrHop.gif]](https://i.imgur.com/YotrHop.gif) |
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03 Jul 2011, 15:23
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Crime, actiune, poate, poate si putina comedie, asta banuiesc ca se va gasi in acest fic, caci, nu exista un lucru facut fara amuzament, poate Daria, cine stie se impiedica cand alearga dupa un hot dupa ce termina academia sau ma rog
 Imi place si astept capitolul I !
Il n'y a rien près de verité. ![[Image: loveiswhat.gif]](http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/dd513/RobbyGFX/loveiswhat.gif) |
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03 Jul 2011, 15:32
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Hmm,am scris capitolul I,dar nu a iesit asa de bine pe cum ma asteptam,asa ca ma mai gandesc daca il voi posta sau scriu altul
 . [din nou :-l]In fine ... Multumesc tuturor pentru comentarii > <Mai astept pareri,sfaturi,critici ...
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03 Jul 2011, 15:37
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Two is accopany ; three is a party !. ![[Image: tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo1_250.gif]](http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo1_250.gif) ![[Image: tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo2_250.gif]](http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m1qxd6Y9Xa1qdksdzo2_250.gif) Give me love like never before, 'cause lately I've been craving more, And It's been a while but I still feel the same, Maybe I should let you go, You Know I'll fight my corner, And that tonight I'll call ya, After my blood is Drowning in alcohol, No I just wanna hold ya. |
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03 Jul 2011, 17:55
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Astept capitolul 1
# If we cease to belive in love, why would we want to live? I've lost my sense in life. #
![[Image: signature____by_indiamoon-d4q5sxh.png]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/049/b/e/signature____by_indiamoon-d4q5sxh.png) * She's such a gorgeous nightmare. |
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03 Jul 2011, 22:26
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Rose, ai inceput fic`ul despre care mi`ai spus, si imi pare bine >
<Razbunaree ador cuvantul asta Imi place, deci astept capitolul 1 :>
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03 Jul 2011, 22:29
(This post was last modified: 03 Jul 2011, 22:30 by Ellena R. Howard.)
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Deci da...toata lumea e atrasa de "razbunare"
eu is atrasa de cuvantul "gust" ma gandesc cum are gustul razbunarea asta. Dar pentru asta e nevoie de urmatorul capitol. Ce pot spune? totul e ok deocamdata, mi-a atras atentia, dar se poate mai bine.Spor la treaba. 
![[Image: 2hgfx45.jpg]](http://i44.tinypic.com/2hgfx45.jpg) I have my dream, I try to stay whit earth, but i look inside my soull
Sig By Ginny ... Thx my love |
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